you know i think updating as you do with snippets of what you've written is great. i was wondering why laura thought of amanda as her pet. but see... now i know! :) i just took... notice, of 'where' you stopped before... like falling a cliff by looking over it, it was. :)
this is a great line: Family was the girl in her bed or her close friends she wouldn't mind having as lovers...
so, this is a story you have or are going to submit to playboy? complete fiction piece?
Re: i'm liking it...mirage_knightMarch 8 2006, 04:39:40 UTC
It was a short story I submitted a few months back.
Right now I'm rewriting it as a novella with the same characters and expanding on it (i.e. stretching 20 or so pages into 200)... So it's mostly new material on an existing framework that I've had rattling around in my head and on my hard drive for a year or so now.
I don't like the limits of short stories, this way I can be much more intimate and detailed with the two main characters.
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this is a great line:
Family was the girl in her bed or her close friends she wouldn't mind having as lovers...
so, this is a story you have or are going to submit to playboy? complete fiction piece?
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Right now I'm rewriting it as a novella with the same characters and expanding on it (i.e. stretching 20 or so pages into 200)... So it's mostly new material on an existing framework that I've had rattling around in my head and on my hard drive for a year or so now.
I don't like the limits of short stories, this way I can be much more intimate and detailed with the two main characters.
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