cool ending... i dig the last part of the chapter in the beginning that way now by the time that i've read all the background, that 1st chapter seems so far away... like a memory. i think that makes one understand the characters better... because we already know what they've done, now we're learning why.
mutual adoration... what a tricky thing. i know exactly how laura feels in that last paragraph. where all your needs seem to be met but it's still hollow and your partner seems so fulfilled... i think that's worse than being in amanda's spot. somehow, to me, adoring is a nicer feeling than being adored by someone you don't love... but mutual adoration's probably a miracle and should be treated as such. :)
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mutual adoration... what a tricky thing. i know exactly how laura feels in that last paragraph. where all your needs seem to be met but it's still hollow and your partner seems so fulfilled... i think that's worse than being in amanda's spot. somehow, to me, adoring is a nicer feeling than being adored by someone you don't love... but mutual adoration's probably a miracle and should be treated as such. :)
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I've only had this happen once in my life.
I've longed for it ever since.
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may your longing turn to bliss, Ana. :)
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