Suicide Note; Chapter 05 (Part III)

[mirage_knight]

Don't know if the title of the chapter is misleading or not...

Here's another update.

Character development ahead.Suicide Note

Comments

[tropical_hermit]

that last thing laura says to sharon is super smart... pointing out the complex in hopes of avoiding it. she must be a psych student, huh? :)

i really like how the story is developing. the characters are not one or two dimensional... even the background figures 'strike out' to the foreground albeit with actual punches... but... it's a good read is what i'm stumbling to say. :) and i'm glad you're writing it. and i feel grateful that you let me read it. thank you.

Very enjoyable reading

[unklekirk]

Your story has captured my imagination and I am there watching and listening to the characters... even feeling the weather. I must agree with everything tropical_hermit said. You realize, of course, that we are waiting for more.... just not asking for it. Thank you for what you have written.