Oh, look. A fanfiction. o_O;

May 15, 2008 21:21

I've started writing this during Chemistry. That would at least explain its weirdness. o_O; I have no other excuse. |D

Title: (Who needs a title? XD)
Characters: Niou and Yagyuu. o_O;
Warnings: Out of character, weird, un-beta-d, weird, English is not my mother tongue, weird. Really.
Words: Between 310 and 320. |D

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You blink and look around.
You are near a forest. You smile and start walking towards the forest. It looks nice and cool, which you like, since the sun is burning down on you. You smile and look up at it.
The sun really does burn. You can see the flames and suddenly, it’s getting bigger.
You start running.
The forest burns.
You can hear it burn and turn around.

The forest is gone. Instead, there is a desert behind you.

You run.
You run away, away from the desert, away from the heat.

"It’s too hot", you think. You want to stop, just to stop running. But you can’t stop. You are tired and it’s just too hot, but you can’t stop running.

And so you run. You keep running and running and running ... and suddenly, you’re in a forest.

You can stop and so you decide to rest and lean against a huge tree. You catch your breath and close your eyes. "So relaxing", you think and smile.

Suddely, you are being pressed against the tree. You turn your head to see what exactly is holding you and freeze.

It’s the tree.

The tree holds you and there’s a huge hole.
It looks like a mouth. You try to get free, but it doesn’t work. You try to get up to run away but fail again.

"Niou-kun?"

You freeze. Wait. Was there a voice calling you?

"Niou-kun!"

You blink. Somebody called you. A familiar voice...

Suddenly, the tree lets go of you and you fall down. Your head starts hurting. Slowly, everything turns black. You can’t see anymore.

You blink. And you blink again. You lie next to your bed and Yagyuu kneels beside you. "Are you alright, Niou-kun?"
You nod and stare at him. "I had a weird dream. A really weird one". You get up and sit down on your bed. "Wanna hear?"
When Yagyuu nods and sits down next to you, you start telling him what you dreamt of.

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Uhm~ Tell me what mistakes I made? Please? XD
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