ANSWER IS NEAR - FIRST FRAGMENT -

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Title: ANSWER IS NEAR  - FIRST FRAGMENT -
Author: mirazuki_yuuri
Pairing/Subject: Ryutaro-centric, DaiChii (siblings)
Rating: R
Genre: drama, romance, violence, angst
Summary: Secrets are meant to be kept. So does promises.
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys...or their ass..(okay,maybe I'm plotting something that involves kidnapping Keito and marry him everyday before

Comments

[hstarfirej]

I had been anticipating this!!!!! :D YAY! I thought about this story recently as well.... XD

OMG OMG OMG Someone wants to kill Ryutaro!!!! I wonder who it is.... I'm guessing Yamada!!! :D but I have no idea XD

At the beginning I was very confused, but now most things are clear :D

Ohohoho I love this x3 very interesting and mysterious.... I'm very curious!!! :D

[mirazuki_yuuri]

KIWIIIIIIIIII!!
Yay!! lol u really think about this story?
Wow, I feel ashamed that this story doesn't really fit ur expectation... :3

Guess, guess, guess.. wow! Kiwi, u r really good in guessing I'm not telling anything :p

I'm soooooo happy that u love this! I love u Kiwi!!
Thanks for reading n commenting!!

[hstarfirej]

ALLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!

I do! I do!!! It always makes me curious x3
IT WILL IT WILL! Anything Al writes shall meet my expectation x3 as long as it's in english...

Hehehe I enjoy guessing to much :D It's cool I just guess a lot

:D Why wouldn't I love it?! Mysteriousness is awesum x3 I love u too Al! :D

No problem :D I just realised u hav twitter so I shall follow u! :D I'm kiwikizify lol everybody's finding out my real name /facepalm

[masquea]

MAISPOT. That I will not get to until my finals are over. Aka, 2 weeks. /cough.

Huuu~ Ohemgees,thatYabuiconmademelaughsohardIalmostpeed.

[mirazuki_yuuri]

U r in the middle of finals? Best of luck to u Ari!!
I usually do this with Sami, but u may need this too..
Sending my TOMODACHI PAWAAAA TO ARIA MY FAVORITE BEAUTIFUL FLOWER.....
There. U have my tomodachi pawaaa.. use it if u can't answer the questions XDDD

lol he looks super hilarious deshou~

[masquea]

GAH. SCREW STUDYING. /throws books into the trash.
My exams are next week~ Apparently, they're harder than the end of course exams so, in literal terms, I'm doomed. ;A; /catches tomodachi power and shoves in pocket. Hai~ I shall remember that for when I can't answer biology questions. XD

Yabuchii makes the funniest faces ever. -w- Other than Hikaru, of course. That's why they make a cute pair. :D

ANYWAYS;
Uwahhh~ Is someone out for Ryuu-chan?! NANDEEEE?! Ryuu-chan! WTFUDGE DID YOU DO?! I feel that it's..uhh...YAMA-CHAN! Well, either Yama-chan or Chii but I'd rather think Yama-chan in this kind of situation. Yamaryuuuu~<3 If so...then Ryuu-chan must have stolen buta-chan's strawberries and cakes, ne~ Bakaryuu~ xD

[mirazuki_yuuri]

WHICH CAVE HAVE U BEEN HIDING IN SAMANTHA?
I MISH U BUDDY!!
Should I send u tomodachi pawaa??

Not telling~

lol I'm sure Keito can resist his doe-eyes attack :p

Please be happy.. gloomy Sami make me all discouraged :((
I'll upload the pictures tomorrow!! XDD

[ichigocherry]

critics critics hurmmmm?

one thing, maybe its because my brain is fried but I can't seem to make out the story.. translation: a bit confused. I think it is my brain considering how other people can understand it fine. xD;; /whackbrain. maybe its because it's a multichapter? I have to read this again after the next chapter arrives~

overall, from what I remember, I don't see any mishap in the timeline, or maybe I didn't notice. xD I'm a bit overwhelmed by the sudden rush of the intro of the charas but maybe that's just me. xD

AND YAY FOR NEW LAYOUT.

[ichigocherry]

read it again and now I get the gist of it. xD can't wait to know more. :D the first para took me off guard cuz of the mystery weird agent assasin thingy magig atmosphere. xD

dont get about the daichi pairin in the story but i guess we'll have to see ne? xD

[mirazuki_yuuri]

Oh, the critic is here~ hahahaha
The main purpose of this story is to play with ur brain. So, any confusion is gladly acceptable :p

lol u make it sound like u r reading the article for comprehension test..

overwhelmed by the sudden rush of the intro of the charas
because one of the character is DAIKI, u mean.. :p

[ichigocherry]

hahah! am I the only critic you know?
eh~ but remember, confusion is a no no. mystery to arouse curiosity is the way. You don't want to lose readers that way. If a reader is majorly confused, they won't bother.

I blame school. /shrugs/ better yet, I blame that English course I'm taking.

/blush/ THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT. DONT DRAG THAT PENGY INTO THIS.