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Sticks and Stones
Jan 16, 2012 21:43
Mother created me out of what was left of her garden. The willow branches formed my slender frame, giving me the grace that enticed the human men as I danced, and the ability to bend in the harsh winds of adversity without breaking (
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imafarmgirl
January 17 2012, 13:32:50 UTC
This is really beautifully written. So poetic and sad.
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whipchick
January 17 2012, 16:55:07 UTC
Lovely modern myth...reminds me of elements of Persephone and Pygmalion stories.
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mirrorfortress
January 18 2012, 21:22:11 UTC
Thank you. When I saw the prompt I thought of golems actually :)
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frecklestars
January 17 2012, 18:53:45 UTC
Have you read Francesca Lia Block? This is very reminiscent of her style. I love it.
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mirrorfortress
January 18 2012, 21:24:53 UTC
Glad you liked it.I've not read any of Block's work, so thanks for pointing out a new author to me!
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basric
January 18 2012, 05:29:55 UTC
A gorgeous powerful piece of writing. Well done.
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rumplebuttkins
January 18 2012, 14:54:49 UTC
Really descriptive and well composed. Good work, as per usual.
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