Three little words

Oct 31, 2011 19:22

**Trigger Warning. This entry deals with harm to a child.**It's my fault ( Read more... )

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basric November 2 2011, 00:18:00 UTC
A very scary tale. Well done.

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mirrorfortress November 2 2011, 13:18:13 UTC
Thank you.

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fading_light November 2 2011, 08:43:13 UTC
This makes me sick to my stomach. This is written well, but...ugh.

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mirrorfortress November 2 2011, 13:01:41 UTC
Oh. Man. Sorry. :(

We're not supposed to edit stuff after it's posted, but I'm going to ask Gary if it's okay to put a warning.

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myrna_bird November 2 2011, 13:37:37 UTC
Excellent. That was all you needed to say.

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mirrorfortress November 3 2011, 14:19:07 UTC
Thank you :)

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pixiebelle November 2 2011, 19:03:23 UTC
Wow! That's just crazy! But well done. Very well done.

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mirrorfortress November 3 2011, 14:25:47 UTC
Thanks :)

I'm rather sorry it's still freaking people out - I'd toned it down a lot because I couldn't bear making it closer to the real cases I'd read.

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pixiebelle November 3 2011, 14:48:54 UTC
Don't apologize! If you consider who I'm dating, you'd see that I'm not easily bothered by any type of fiction. I never like it when people think they should tell someone that their writing (especially fiction) is too extreme... It should push buttons and raise emotions. Real life is uncomfortable sometime. If you don't like it, don't read it... But never tell a writer that they should tone it down for the sake of your own comfort.

If you were condoning child abuse or something for real, I'd have a problem. But it's fiction and it shouldn't always be pleasant rainbows and butterflies.

I like it the way it is :)

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mirrorfortress November 3 2011, 15:06:04 UTC
Ooops. No one's said tone it down, sorry if I gave that impression. The stuff I detailed in my kenakeri journal is just making me Super Emo Girl these days.

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baxaphobia November 2 2011, 22:41:25 UTC
Yikes! EEEK! The shock value of this is just...just...EEK!

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mirrorfortress November 3 2011, 15:07:12 UTC
Thanks for reading.

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