01: Your boyfriend's best friend is like his dad, so next time greet him as father-in-law

May 29, 2014 12:40

Your boyfriend's best friend is like his dad, so next time greet him as father-in-law
Because Mark should have known better when Jaebum started asking him about his future plans.
mark/jinyoung

self indulgent college!au don't look at me

excuse me, what are you saying )

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tarjens May 29 2014, 18:39:07 UTC
This was so beautiful and delicious to read! I'm so glad I came across your post in tumblr, being a desperate sucker for everything markjin I instantly clicked the link and honestly did not expect to find something this awesome ( ... )

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mirufiore May 31 2014, 03:52:41 UTC
first off, thank you for reading and commenting haha ♥ i really appreciate it and wow when i saw this comment in my inbox i was really happy!!

i love college!aus so much ahhhhhhhhhhhh so many scenarios is right lmao i would write them all if i could (but alas this whole writing business is still new to me and i have no confidence in writing at all orz)

you date one and have to deal with the other that's how jj project works!! mark probably wants to get back at jaebum for the rest of his life for that "talk" even though he already kinda did by scarring the poor guy haaa that or he just wants to make out with his boyfriend who knows!!

i'm glad that you liked and the (dumb) drawings! jackson just wanted to be invited and hang with his college buddies

i hope i can write more in the future too, self-indulgent college!au really is self indulgent LMAO

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anonymous May 30 2014, 01:42:44 UTC
Ahhh, don't apologize! This is *adorable*-you did the cute protective best friend trope well without it being overly cliche, and the interactions were in character and also really funny. I'm always so excited to read good Markjin, and indulgent college AUs are my faaaav!!!

Also the IG pics were golden-so cute and funny and the little bits of Jackson were perfect!

Basically this is so good and I hope you write more :)

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mirufiore May 31 2014, 03:58:04 UTC
ahh thank you anon you are too kind ♥

i love college!au markjin a lot ahhhh i'm glad you think so! all i wanted was jaebum messing with mark and if people liked it i would be happy haha

thank you thank you and i hope i will too!

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anonymous May 30 2014, 03:47:51 UTC
Hey there! I just loved your fic alot so I had to leave something here haha
First of all, I loved the 'brotherly love' JJs are sharing, since they are one of my top 2 OTPS haha they just give me a lot of feels (of coz the other one is Markjin yesss >.<)
JB's serious interrogation almost makes me wonder if he had any feelings toward Jr before Mark appeared in their lives (and I think he did lol)
but I'm definitely sure that he is happy now to see his lil brother happy with somebody :) The scene where JB said “You deflowered my little brother!” was EPIC hahaha

Also I really liked how Mark firmly explained to JB his affection towards his love, although he was flustered with his face reddened and all.
It was just too cuteeeeee T______T and the last part.. I almost died.. I just lovee lovee seeing Mark and Jinyoung showing their affection toward each other.
When they were kissing and mumbling, It was just so cute and natural and sexy and .a lkdfja lsj fI... I don't know I just loved it so much lol
was like seeing Markjin in real life >.< ( ... )

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mirufiore May 31 2014, 04:03:06 UTC
hello!! thank you for taking the time to comment haha i'm really glad! (ah i love jjp a lot too)
they're really like brothers and if one's happy the other one is happy too! and older brothers must defend their little brothers' honor from dumb boyfriends haaa

i'm happy you liked it!! and i hope i can write more of this au in the future, all of them are too precious and i really can't resist.........especially markjin ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

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mjallirow May 30 2014, 09:11:05 UTC
OH MY GOD I'm in such a rush so I'll just apologize in advance for the hysteria and incoherency; OHMYGODILOVEYOUWTF THIS THIS FUCKING /THIS/ SO HEADCANON DO YOU EVEN UNDERSTAND
I FEEL AS IF YOU LOOKED INTO MY BRAIN AND INDULGED ALL OF MY MARKJIN FEELS SERIOUS I AM BEING SERIOUS SERIOUSLY
PROTECTIVE/CREEPY/INAPPROPRIATE JAEBUM IS SUCH A YESYESYES
you hey HEY yeah you I love you okay
How have you not written like a LOT that was so seamless and I could just really see it and it was glorious I tell you and really funny too!! I was like HAHA aww HAHAHAaaww
I am so sorry about this forgive my conduct but I love mark and jinyoung so much and this was everything I wanted it to be *sobs* I AIN'T CRYIN'
THANK YOU THIS MADE MY DAY OK kiss kiss hug huggie snuggle snug wtf anyways yes this was faboulus and fantastic and the little comic-things were so great like yes that is Jackson hahaha aw man
Please please tell me what u want blood gold the elder wand?? you simply MUST write more of this of them you can't deprive the world of this!! DO u hear ( ... )

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mirufiore May 31 2014, 04:10:54 UTC
ahhh thankyou for reading and commenting ♥ !!! and i'm glad you like it so much!
and ngl it's my headcanon of how jaebum deals with markjin too haha protective!jaebum is a+

thank you ah you flatter me haha i did my best to make this as coherent and decent as possible! i'm happy you think so and i hope i can write more in the future too!! gain some confidence in my writing and do more self-indulgent markjin things hehe

(the elder wand is too much responsibility sdjhsfj but hp!au markjin ah....... i wish)

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kamenajin June 11 2014, 23:39:42 UTC
A bunch of love for the author of this amazing fic.
College AU is one of my favorite theme and your fic nailed it.
I really don't know what to say, speechless? but really i freaking loved it.
I always love this jaebum/jinyoung bffery and jaebum being all protective of jinyoung was the best!
Jaebum acting like he's Jinyoung's dad was cute and funny but jaebum finding out that mark and jinyoung
finally "did" it (Hooray for Markjin haha) was epic!
Protective brother strikes in!!
Mark and Jaebum pillow fight? I want to see that one in rl! hahahaha.
Sweet and fluffy jinyoung and Mark at the end will always be love. The sweet kisses and cuddling, never faisl to make me smile.
It has this fluffy feeling lol, idk, i can totally imagine them like that.
The drawings are very nice too. too cute! plus the captions ^^
I don't know if my comment still makes sense
but i just want you to know that i enjoyed reading your fic
and really loved it. Thank you for writing this and hoping to read more from you!
Take care!

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