Private Entry to the Judges: The Princess & The Toad's Story
Private to Luna, Susan & Daphne
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Once upon a time on a far away deserted island lived an evil prince named Eddie. Evil Prince Eddie had an awesome magic door that connected his deserted island to Tibet, where the Easter Bunny lived.
Evil Prince Eddie loved holidays, so he tried to summon the Easter Bunny over. Prince Eddie waited all day for a ring or a ding at his doorbell. But the Easter Bunny wasn't going to come, obviously. (Eddie was a bad prince.) So, Evil Prince Eddie decied to kidnap the Easter Bunny.
Back in Tibet, the Easter Bunny was guarded by a warrior-princess known as Meaghan's mother. She wielded many weapons, like tornados, and arrows, and a wand, and a stick, and a magic crayon. She was also very cute and flexible and had long, beautiful hair. Everyone who met her fell in love with her, and Evil Prince Eddie was no exception. When he arrived, Meaghan's mother was upstairs in her castle boiling water for soup because both the Easter Bunny and her pet bird were sick with a cough.
Evil Prince Eddie saw her and immediately forgot all about the dumb Easter Bunny. Since she was busy cooking, she didn't have her weapons handy, and Pricne Eddie was able to kidnap her. He brought her back to his deserted island and tied her to a tree.
"Huh? What are you doing? Unhand me, you loony fiend!" Meaghan's mother exclaimed.
Evil Prince Eddie laughed maniacally.
But then something mysterious started happening. Because, you see, Evil Prince Eddie owned a paper products company, and the trees on his deserted island were not very happy about how Evil Prince Eddie would always cut them down and turn them into paper. So the tree that Meaghan's mother was tied to, it came to life! And rebelled! And magically untied Meaghan's mother, but Evil Prince Eddie did not notice yet because he was too busy laughing evilly.
Back in London, at the Leaky Cauldron, Prince Michael (no relation to Michael Corner) was reading the Quibbler and read an article about how the famed warrior-princess Meaghan's mother was kidnapped by the Evil Prince Eddie. They knew it was Evil Prince Eddie who was responsible because the Easter Bunny had overheard the commotion when she was kidnapped, and he was hopping his way upstairs but couldn't get there in time.
The problem was that no one knew where Evil Prince Eddie's evil lair was. No one, that is, except for Prince Michael, who at one point had been flatmates with Evil Prince Eddie and knew where Evil Prince Eddie's deserted island was. So Prince Michael flew to the deserted island on his Firebolt and rescued Meaghan's mother, and they lived happily ever after.
Is this story an fairy tale? 2 points
Is it set on a deserted island? 1 point
Did they use all of the words? If yes, 24 points. (-1 point for every word missing)Evil, door, quibbler, paper, products, sick, crayon, awesome, Meaghan's mother, stick, Leaky, summon, ring, bad, turn, easter bunny, Tibet, arrows, bird, ding, looney, tree, cough, hair, me, upstairs, firebolt, boiling, wand, cute, Michael, flexile, dumb, huh, tornados
Did you like the stoy?: 1 to 5 points
Was it believable?: 1 to 5 points
Would you buy an action figure of these characters from WWW? 1 to 5 points
Do you think the couple wrote the story together? 1 to 10 points.
Feel free to discuss with the other judges.