Becoming Nothing, prequel to Classic Stigma

Nov 10, 2004 16:54

Title: Becoming Nothing
The Prequel to Classic Stigma
Author: si_ta
Genre: Angst
Rating: R
Summary: The last act of the war, Luna and Harry are trapped within Voldemort's cell. Harry is ready to give up. Luna teaches him that there is something much more.
Author's Note: You can read Classic Stigma now or you can read this first. I doubt you'll be ( Read more... )

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teh_del November 11 2004, 07:31:52 UTC
I like it! Luna and Harry! I didn't take it romantically though. It seemed more like a friendship, but it was still good! Squee!

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mishaphappens November 11 2004, 15:28:00 UTC
No, the point was not to take it romantically. Their relationship was purely friendship and nothing more.

Thanks for reading!

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oconel November 11 2004, 16:04:46 UTC
Oh, Oh, Oh....... I love this!

*off to read Classic Stigma*

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mishaphappens November 12 2004, 18:03:12 UTC
Thank you!

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Speechless, again. lambourngb November 11 2004, 20:56:42 UTC
*swallows hard* God. Um. Yeah. *wipes eyes* I really like this. It was all so read, from the darkness to the description of the smells, to the overwhelming sense of hopeless captivity. The title is perfect ( ... )

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Re: Speechless, again. mishaphappens November 12 2004, 18:14:41 UTC
God, your review was a treasure to read, as always.

from the darkness to the description of the smells, to the overwhelming sense of hopeless captivity

Ru pointed that out to me once too. I'm glad she wasn't the only one. ^___^

Luna was an incredible force for hope, for escape, for love, and for strength to carry on after this.

And not lovers. That was the whole point really - deeper than friendship but not quite lovers. She was exactly all those things you just described. All of them. Thank you. ^___^

I doubt the end of the JKR's world could come close to this in my mind- because *this* is what I believe to be true. This is what I think should happen.

Oh MAN, is that a huge compliment that still sends me reeling. I'm hoping she could do better than me or...well, we always have fanfiction, don't we? ^___~ THANK YOU.

I know hard this was to write

I didn't think like that at first, but now that you pointed it out...Hell, IT WAS. Wow. Thanks!

(it was very hard to read in an emotional way)

WAH!

It's a perfect note in ( ... )

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rurounihime November 11 2004, 21:29:28 UTC
Oh, sweets, this was beautiful. Don't ever doubt yourself. I love what you have done with the Burning Curse scene. So painful... so visceral. Nice work.

You capture Luna so well. Hard to know this character fromt he canon, but I think you've got her perfectly. She is going to play a large role, I know it. Their relationship is going to be one to be treasured, as it is here. Somewhere between lover and friend... fireelemental79 and I were discussing this last night, this weird in-between type of relationship in terms of Sirius and Remus. She said to call people who have this connection friends downplays what they have, and to call them lovers is not quite right either. You have captured this aspect beautifully. Wonderful work.

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mishaphappens November 12 2004, 18:24:45 UTC
WOW, Thank you again! I've kept EVERY compliment you've given me so far, I've never deleted one of them.

Don't ever doubt yourself

Not unless you say it's utter crap. *winkshugs*

I used to think that Luna and Harry would get together in the books. If they do, that's fine, but I also adore this aspect of their relationship. So close, but so far away from each other that it just strengthens them.

Man, thank you so much for everything. You are so wonderful - taking the time to beta for me, and then coming back to review AGAIN. Man...Man...Just thank you so much.

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rurounihime November 12 2004, 23:30:32 UTC
I think if Harry gets with anyone in the canon, it will be Luna, but I actually do not see him becoming part of a couple at all. I think he will be the lonely hero, always separate, always alone, like Frodo. He won't quite fit in the world he helps to create, if he survives.

And it's no problem. I like getting a chance to see your work before you give it to the public. ^__^

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freaky_zero November 11 2004, 21:53:02 UTC
WAH!! MORE DAMN YOU!! *pokes* I'd read most of this before, when it was in earlier stages. ^___^ And it's even better when you read it again. Guh. Very nice, luv. Can't wait until you're motivated to write like this again :)

P.S. (Told you you'd have lots of comments and I'd feel dumb for waiting so long >.>;;; )

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mishaphappens November 12 2004, 18:27:51 UTC
I'm hoping to finish this girl story by the end of December, so I can concentrate back onto the sequel to Classic Stigma.

I'm glad you finally got around to reading it, you lazy bum. I only shoved it at you a million times. XD XD XD

Thank you for leaving a review! It means a lot to me!

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freaky_zero November 12 2004, 18:30:55 UTC
I read it every time you 'shoved' it at me, I'll have you know. I just never could remember if I actually had or not! XD You send me so much!

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