that was a good chapter--- ut oh the candle wax has been used--that stuff hurts--i've got burnt with it myself over my own stupididty--hmm i wonder what the ice is for.... cant wait for more--really good chapter btw
You always end up writing stuff so hot that I can't form good sentences afterwards, so my comments end up sounding stupid. But that just means you write super awesome and I love you.
Haha, I just noticed you were asking whether the writing style is annoying or not. Nope, it's not annoying at all! (My previous comment should be clue enough=))
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haha Love you honey.
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I love the style you wrote this with, present tense and no names=)
Can't wait for more!!
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Oh well, All good.
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Your fics make me happy. I just re-read it, and I can't stop beaming at the screen=)
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lol okay i have to say frankie is pretty damnnn hot! lol
update soon
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