An object of affection seems an object of perfection. (standalone)

May 06, 2006 18:31

- Tittle: An object of affection seems and object of perfection.
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madelinesimone May 8 2006, 02:39:43 UTC
I love this! That moment where the blinders of lust and love and affection come off and you realize that the other person is not perfect like you'd fooled yourself into believing. And I felt so bad for Bert beating himself up the whole time. But, that made the shift so much better--like when the other person seems more flawed, you can see yourself as better than you had.
And the summary line definitely made sense.
I can't wait to read what you write next!

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miss_kelsi_alix May 8 2006, 09:43:54 UTC
ohh excellent!
I'm glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!! :D

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quirkyblah38 May 8 2006, 08:16:02 UTC
Mmmmmm..

*drools*

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miss_kelsi_alix May 8 2006, 09:45:40 UTC
Lol @ Soph.
:P

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youthstate May 8 2006, 12:19:21 UTC
Oomg i loved this is, like seriously there is nothing wrong with it (other then the jamia being on the wrong side of frank) but omg love love this.

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miss_kelsi_alix May 8 2006, 12:24:52 UTC
Shit, you are right!!! it is on the left, Damnit.
I had to stop and think about that but grrr now you have pointed it out i remember and i will have to change it. But but but! then it won't be over his heart.
Not to mention that i feel incredibly dumb for not realising that when i look at him in a photo his right and left are opposite to mine.

Hmmm.. Grrrrrrr.

damn.

Glad you liked it though.
*sulks with a sad face*

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youthstate May 8 2006, 13:56:23 UTC
No sweetie it will still be over his heart, the heart is on the left side, trust me on that. I have a tattoo over my heart and its on the left. I thought you might have looked at the picture and just gone right with it.

Keep on writing shit like this (shit in the good sense not the bad)

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miss_kelsi_alix May 9 2006, 13:46:14 UTC
Omfg.
You would not understand or beleive how much i am laughing at my own stupidity right now.
I really need to get some decent sleep.

Oh fuck, Clearly i have made a wonderfull first impression to you. LOL!
Sorry, I'm not usually this dumb. Rough few weeks, im just a tad scattered.

Have a squiz here: http://webzinewetdream.livejournal.com/ at the other stuff i have written, I think the only other thing you might like will be "becuase he loves you"
but *shrug* have a look.. maybe?

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Re: wow! webzinewetdream May 9 2006, 13:49:21 UTC
No, it's more like he feels dirty becuase he shouldnt have had sex with frank.. But yeah, i spose thats kinda the same thing as think your no good.

Wow, as in you liked it?

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Re: wow! miss_kelsi_alix May 10 2006, 06:57:35 UTC
Oh excellent.
Thats always good when someone enjoys something even with a person they don't like!! Yay for me.

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bert_addict March 29 2008, 17:23:09 UTC
hahahah i read the whole thing thinking it was gerard/bert
and now i realize it's frankkk!!!!!!!!!!!!
crazycrazy.

but i love it
so good.

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