I love this! That moment where the blinders of lust and love and affection come off and you realize that the other person is not perfect like you'd fooled yourself into believing. And I felt so bad for Bert beating himself up the whole time. But, that made the shift so much better--like when the other person seems more flawed, you can see yourself as better than you had. And the summary line definitely made sense. I can't wait to read what you write next!
Shit, you are right!!! it is on the left, Damnit. I had to stop and think about that but grrr now you have pointed it out i remember and i will have to change it. But but but! then it won't be over his heart. Not to mention that i feel incredibly dumb for not realising that when i look at him in a photo his right and left are opposite to mine.
No sweetie it will still be over his heart, the heart is on the left side, trust me on that. I have a tattoo over my heart and its on the left. I thought you might have looked at the picture and just gone right with it.
Keep on writing shit like this (shit in the good sense not the bad)
Omfg. You would not understand or beleive how much i am laughing at my own stupidity right now. I really need to get some decent sleep.
Oh fuck, Clearly i have made a wonderfull first impression to you. LOL! Sorry, I'm not usually this dumb. Rough few weeks, im just a tad scattered.
Have a squiz here: http://webzinewetdream.livejournal.com/ at the other stuff i have written, I think the only other thing you might like will be "becuase he loves you" but *shrug* have a look.. maybe?
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And the summary line definitely made sense.
I can't wait to read what you write next!
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I'm glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!! :D
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*drools*
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:P
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I had to stop and think about that but grrr now you have pointed it out i remember and i will have to change it. But but but! then it won't be over his heart.
Not to mention that i feel incredibly dumb for not realising that when i look at him in a photo his right and left are opposite to mine.
Hmmm.. Grrrrrrr.
damn.
Glad you liked it though.
*sulks with a sad face*
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Keep on writing shit like this (shit in the good sense not the bad)
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You would not understand or beleive how much i am laughing at my own stupidity right now.
I really need to get some decent sleep.
Oh fuck, Clearly i have made a wonderfull first impression to you. LOL!
Sorry, I'm not usually this dumb. Rough few weeks, im just a tad scattered.
Have a squiz here: http://webzinewetdream.livejournal.com/ at the other stuff i have written, I think the only other thing you might like will be "becuase he loves you"
but *shrug* have a look.. maybe?
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Wow, as in you liked it?
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Thats always good when someone enjoys something even with a person they don't like!! Yay for me.
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and now i realize it's frankkk!!!!!!!!!!!!
crazycrazy.
but i love it
so good.
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