Devil in Jersey city. (1/?)

Jul 15, 2006 18:48


Title: Devil in Jersey city. (1/?)
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redbull4meplz July 15 2006, 11:43:36 UTC
*evil grin*
i like Mikey as the devil, his innocence is just too, innocent.
and i like the innocent Frankie.
all i have to say is update soon!!!

i love this
xoxo

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miss_kelsi_alix July 15 2006, 11:45:54 UTC
Why, thank you ever so much. I love Devil Mikey myself, and innocent Frank is always a fave.

Love the Minimcr Frank in your icon.

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jem4water July 15 2006, 12:12:29 UTC
This is such an interesting concept! I really love it so far.

Can't wait for more.

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miss_kelsi_alix July 15 2006, 12:15:04 UTC
Oh, well thank you ever so much! :D

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madelinesimone July 15 2006, 13:27:08 UTC
It's about time!
That was the best way to start my day. I love it. You already knew I love the concept. I love Mikey preying on Frank so creepily. And I love that last line. (Makes me a little sad I'm not getting a personal invitation to hell from Devil Mikey.)
Can't wait for more! ♥

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miss_kelsi_alix July 15 2006, 13:31:09 UTC
Good morning my love.

I'm glad after all my teasing you actualy liked the story.. would have been terrible if you didn't! haha.

I would very happily accept an invitation to hell if it was Mikey inviting me, and then i would use one of my 3 wishes to bring Frank along too.. Lol!

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madelinesimone July 15 2006, 14:03:44 UTC
Good morning to you too! Although, it's not morning for you.

How would I not like it? After the sneak peek snippets, I've been waiting impatiently for the rest of it. And Mikey's going to so have the creepy stalker thing going--I like that aspect more than I should.

I would too, although Mikey probably wouldn't be my first choice of devil. Good choice of wishes.

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miss_kelsi_alix July 15 2006, 14:06:55 UTC
haha. You like creepy stalkerness? Maybe i should be worried.

My wishes would go something like.
1, Frank.
2, Frank never allowed to wear clothes again.
3, Chocolate. (possibly to eat off Frank)
Lmao.

Oh, and really.. it's been kinda monring for 6 minutes now, so i accept your comment.

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x_ratedxromance July 15 2006, 16:20:28 UTC
You have no idea how long I've been waiting for anything written by you.

I love how you changed his name to Francis instead of Franklin, it's so much more innocent and childish.

And -gasp- JEPHA? FRANK? I'm so glad you're using different characters. [/end sarcasm]

Ahahaha, but really. You write them really well though. :)

KREALLY I just woke up 10 minutes ago so apologies if this comment really sucks.

But I love this and you. :D

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 00:51:04 UTC
haha oh shush! I dont think i will ever write anything without Frank in it.. and Jepha.. just.. well, he wants to be there too!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate the name Franklin and i hate Francis, so really it was a loose loose situation, but Francis goes better with the image im trying to get.

It's lovely to know you actually wait for me to write things, hopefully i will stop being so slack. (i say that every time, don't i?)

Thankyou for your comment, ♥

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x_ratedxromance July 16 2006, 03:03:38 UTC
I was actually not going to read this, because I am really IN HATE with Mikey right now and will probably be for the rest of my life, but when I saw that you were the author I was like.
God damnit.
I've waited this long for anything to be written,
I'll give it a shot.

Totally worth it. ;)

Franklin makes him sound 80. :(
Grampa [yes I spell it that way] Franklin.

Oh god.
Scary.

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 04:13:50 UTC
haha why are you in hate with Mikey? If it is any consolation - my Mikey image he still has his glasses.. Lol.

ha! My Grampa's name was Frank, but it was actually Francis, so that seems old to me too.. Franklin just reminds me of that cartoon turtle dude...

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killerxshark July 15 2006, 17:01:50 UTC
that is so HOT. Mikey as the devil? preying on FRANK? i love you. can't wait for the next update to see how Mikey gets Frankie to go to hell. ^_^

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 00:51:43 UTC
*huge smile*
Thankyou!! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far!!

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