Devil in Jersey city. (1/?)

Jul 15, 2006 18:48


Title: Devil in Jersey city. (1/?)
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musicislife001 July 15 2006, 21:45:38 UTC
ohh the ending is good....

and wooh new story, really great begginning, but mikey as the devil reminds me of hades from the disney version of hercules for some reason...anyways, great begginning, can't wait for more

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 00:58:49 UTC
hahah, yeah i can see where you are coming from with hades, but remember... Mikey is just regular looking most of the time. Does that help?

Thank you for reading!

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musicislife001 July 16 2006, 01:25:59 UTC
yeah it does help, but the way they act makes me think of the movie..don't know why...anyways great begginning

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sharon_hate July 15 2006, 22:29:24 UTC
LOL. I mean, what kind of person can honestly say they don’t want 3 wishes?? Really. Especially when Mikey's involved.

Looking forward to the next chapter. It looks really interesting.

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 01:00:00 UTC
I totally agree. I don't think Frankie is too bright really.

Thanks for reading!

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hottgrl1289 July 16 2006, 00:38:35 UTC
DUUUUUUUUUDE I think I'm in Loove haha

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 01:00:38 UTC
With who?
Me? Devil!mikey or Innocent!Frankie?
:P

So glad you enjoyed it!

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hottgrl1289 July 16 2006, 01:03:39 UTC
Everything you said heehee

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 01:05:19 UTC
:D

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xogeeislovexo July 16 2006, 01:23:58 UTC
Ooh. I really like this. Never read something of this style before.

Keep it up,

Boo
XO

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 01:44:32 UTC
thank you for reading!!!!!

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lifeinreverie July 16 2006, 02:03:26 UTC
Oh, I am a total AU whore lover,and I must say that this one is not only well written, but highly amusing. I personally enjoy the assertiveness of Mikey's character (even though that was probably done because he's the devil and all). I'd love to read more of this, so please update soon. Excellent job so far.

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miss_kelsi_alix July 16 2006, 02:06:25 UTC
Oh wow, thank you.
And Nope, Mikey is like that becuase that's how i love him, the Devil idea came after i had decided to write a controlling Mikey story. haha

The fact that it is well written is thanks to my beta Ele, but i will gladly take credit for the comedy. :P

I'm going to aim to post more on monday.

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