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[miss_noodles]

Settle & Sink
9-12 / ?
missed parts 1-4? read. 5-8? read.

(9)

He had dreamed of it constantly in the weeks after the flight to the forest, waking up wild-eyed and gasping, feeling starched fibers tighten around his neck. That single instant as the ground dropped away and he became weightless and too heavy at the same time. Allan had known what "a

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[halfapint]

*flail*

AHHH ALLAN! *flails some more* He is so very abused. But he has been rescued, yes? *hopeful, snugs Allan*

*snugs miss_noodles* Moar pls?

[miss_noodles]

Haha, yes, I think he's been rescued, physically anyway. God knows where his mind is. Moar soon indeed! I felt bad for the length between this one and the previous one, so hopefully there will be a new one up in less time. :)

[little_giddy]

*gasp of joy* He's been rescued and is delirious? He's been rescued?!

Again with the awe, and the noose imagery and very real fear in these. I love it. Are we going to find out what "the right choice" is next time?

Also, meant to say in the last bunch, but you took an Allan cliche and made it heart-wrenching: "Not being funny, but you must be getting desperate." Really well paced.

[miss_noodles]

Fantastic. I'm so glad you like these. :) Hopefully the question of "right choice" will be answered next batch, if not, definitely the one after.
Oh, thanks! That saying's such a huge part of him that I knew it needed to be worked in somewhere. Thanks for commenting. ♥

[twolefts]

Love this so much! I'm with kalesbohan on the great use of "I'm not being funny but..." in the last one.

[miss_noodles]

yayyy thanks for leaving a comment. :)

[cobra_judy]

Gorgeous.

[miss_noodles]

thanks! I'm glad you liked them. ♥