Fic:Equilibrium(csi m)

[miss_odell]

Title: Equilibrium
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Comments

[sunhawk]

Hey there! :) Cute fic! Nice first attempt ^_^

You have a few typos, if I may..

as he lean on to his table to look at said attraction’s object,

As he leaned

“Thank you Mr. Wolfe, we’ll take it from here”

missing period before the end quotation mark

He’s thorough” Eric had said

"He's thorough." Eric had said

And is hard to believe that it’s been more than four years

And it's hard...

OK that's what I caught, hope it helps ^_^

[miss_odell]

Thanks for reading, and for the concrit. Of course it helps a lot ;).

[twilightscribe]

“Okay, but just so you know, I don’t kiss on the first date.”

I totally went 'awww!' at that and then starting giggling wildly because of how cute it was. And Ryan is just adorable so the extra cuteness is always a plus.

I loved it, and I hope that I'll get to see more from you in the future. ;D This coming from the author who's only written shameless porn for this pairing.

[miss_odell]

You're absolutely right,Ryan is insanely adorable.I could be watching him all day (that actually was the inspiration for this fic ;))

Thanks for reading!

[charlie_jae]

Sweet first fic. I like the style, its easy to imagine Eric watching Ryan. Him getting busted and called on it, priceless.

[miss_odell]

Thanks for your lovely comment!!

[grey_hunter]

Mmm. ^___^ Just the thing to start off my morning. Will there be a follow-up?

[miss_odell]

Thank you!=)
About the follow up ,actually this was planned as a one shot,so I really don't know :P.

[sexycazzy]

Awww cute! :)

I am beginning to love the Eric/Ryan pairing. :-)

And hopefully, there will be a follow-up? Pretty please?

:)

[miss_odell]

Thanks!I'm glad you liked it
Specially if I can fuel your Ryan/Eric desire *lol*

Follow up? ...I don't know. Let me think about it :P