Comments | miss_odell: Fic: Solace (CM)

miss_odell

Fic: Solace (CM)

Aug 14, 2009 03:59

Title: Solace
Rating: PG 13 (For mentions of abuse and a couple of bad words)
Pairing: Reid/Morgan
Spoilers/Warnings: No spoilers,but it mentions Morgan past .
Notes: Yesterday, as I was watching Profiler Profiled, I realized that even though Reid and Morgan have no scenes together ,it feels like a very slashy ep. And it inspired me to write this ( Read more... )

reid/morgan, fic, criminal minds

Comments 20

samueljames August 14 2009, 10:43:40 UTC

This was lovely, how Morgan stopped equating being with a man with his abuse. The please stay line was perfect and I know Reid will take care of him.

miss_odell August 14 2009, 15:20:16 UTC

Thank you for reading and take the time to leave feedback. It really means a lot to me ;)

bookgodess15 August 14 2009, 12:32:00 UTC

*jaw hangs*

I love this. It is beautiful and perfect and so well written that I just love it. I want you to write more.

He could never ask Reid to help him fight his demons when he knew Spencer had enough demons of his own to cope with.

This. This is so Morgan, it hurts. This whole thing was so Morgan that it hurt. I'm kind of incoherent with happiness right now, but make no mistake, I want more. Now.

Kay?

miss_odell August 14 2009, 15:35:57 UTC

Thanks!
I really struggled with this one trying to keep my Morgan in character. Because yeah,we all know his "I can do anything on my own and I don't need anybody" attitude.But his internal musings about the abuse drove me crazy. Personally I've never been close to a person that went through that hell, so I pretty much made everything up and crossed my fingers hoping not to fail 100% at it.

So thank you,your comment means a lot to me, specially because you're one of the authors I respect the most in this fandom.

And more is coming. Don't know when,but I'm on it. ;)

bookgodess15 August 14 2009, 15:46:58 UTC

Yeah. Introspective stuff is kind of where I fail--I just end up rambling--but you did it really, really well. I've never been abused, either, but... It just comes off of this story in waves. You did a beautiful job empathizing with his situation.

I'm respected? Awesomesauce. *g*

We desperately need more. This summer drought is even worse than usual, as far as the complete and utter lack of fanfiction goes, so write fast! Write fast!

miss_odell August 14 2009, 20:01:39 UTC

Instrospective is a bitch,no matter how much you love or know the characters. It always take somebody else to tell me that I did fine to be okay with it.

Well,at least,did I do better in the comma department? lol, I was really worried about that.I hope it wasn't so much of an issue this time. I really need a beta!

berryblue_girl August 14 2009, 19:26:08 UTC

This was simply beautiful. So emotional and real! It made my heart hurt for Derek soooo much. Girl, you need to write more, you have really got something here! Sarah

miss_odell August 14 2009, 20:04:15 UTC

Thank you for reading and comenting Sarah, you're very sweet!

Hey don't be sad for Morgan, he got Reid at the end,it can't be bad! ;)

devon99 August 15 2009, 07:54:21 UTC

Quite beautifully written.I would love to read more in this verse as they take those tentative steps forward into a relationship.

miss_odell August 15 2009, 17:28:15 UTC

Thank you! :)

moonflower75 August 16 2009, 22:41:04 UTC

beautiful and kinda heart-breaking in some passages... but in a good way, considering the sweet ending ;D
I love the voice you give Derek and I also like the way you portray Spencer a great deal, even though he isn't the main focus, you give the clear idea he's THERE for Derek.
thank you for sharing

miss_odell August 17 2009, 01:00:18 UTC

Thanks for your comment!!=D