Freezer Burn (48/?)

Feb 14, 2013 16:48

This is not a double post. This is me splitting up one chapter over two entries because I am too prolix for LJ.

Freezer Burn
Genfic; PG-13-ish
Avengers/Captain America ensemble
previous parts | ao3

Steve, Tony, Clint, Natasha, Bruce, Fury; 4500 words )

a pre-crisis girl in a post-crisis world, serial_fb, fic

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lizbet0 February 15 2013, 02:50:02 UTC

I loved the wrap-up to this chapter! What a wonderful image and tribute to Cap!

I was dismayed at Maya's betrayal, for similar reasons to Pepper. {sad face} "The ends justify the means" rationalizations lead to horrible situations, but we humans tend to fall prey to that style of thinking anyway. Maybe one day we'll learn better. (Not likely.)

Are you still feeling like this will wrap up within a few chapters, or am I mis-remembering a comment of yours from times past?

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miss_porcupine February 15 2013, 13:54:02 UTC
Tony has his moments. :)

These two parts count as Chapter 26; the story ends with Chapter 27 and then there will be an epilogue. So, pretty much my next story posts will be the final ones.

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bratfarrar February 16 2013, 18:17:32 UTC
Tony and Tapper had never gotten on better than the hour they had spent bypassing requisition forms and supervisory approvals. - Hah!

This is an awsome (double) chapter--so much good stuff happening. I love Tony's resolve to spite Maya by redeeming Extremis (and mostly pulling himself back together). Hard to believe we're facing the end.

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miss_porcupine February 17 2013, 15:09:34 UTC
I'm a little surprised -- and very excited -- to be at the end. And for that end to be at the scheduled chapter and not three later.

Now to get off my tush and start the finale...

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4thdixiechick February 17 2013, 16:55:05 UTC
Aw! Glad Tony is pulling himself together. Lovely tribute at the end.
Thanks for writing and sharing this story.

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miss_porcupine February 18 2013, 14:52:30 UTC
Thanks. :)

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