Dude Looks Like a Lady -- miss_sanguine

[miss_sanguine]

Author: Miss_Sanguine
Title: Dude Looks Like a Lady
Pairing: Sokka / Mysterious Beautiful "Woman"
Rating: K
Disclaimer: Bryke and Nick own Avatar.
Author's Notes: Just moving some of my fics from FF.net to LJ. Here's one of them. I had so much fun with it. :3
Summary: Drunk Sokka sees a dazzling stranger in the distance and goes to greet her.

Comments

[tsukiryuu]

LMAO! Oh Sokka, sure, blame it on the long hair. XD

Awesome job!

[miss_sanguine]

Heheh. Thanks. :3

[likeacliche]

What an awkward situation XD

Good job on the beginning! Caught my attention again. I like how you made Sokka sound so sure of himself and then wonder what he'd just been talking about XD The overall writing and layout of the fic is good.

But the ending... the ending could have had more to it. Also if Sokka were really that drunk, hearing Zuko's voice wouldn't cause him to suddenly sober up like that. More like he'd get up.. well try to get up XD and be like "Hey, Zuko, you made it. Did you know you're not a girl?". And then maybe Zuko's anger would fade a little and he'd sigh and help Sokka back to wherever they're staying.

What made you think of this? XD My poor Sokka <33 I don't think this one feels as "empty" as others, but maybe cause there's not really the need of elaborating on the emotions? Except maybe a bit more on Zuko's anger? Hm.. but it's better than the bossy Mai one that way so =D

[miss_sanguine]

... I see an extended ending in the near future. Like.. tomorrow or something. You're a genius. <3

I personally just got lazy with this one toward the end and couldn't think of a way to make the ending reverberate.

I don't know what made me think of it. o-o I just had the random thought in class one day of, "I wonder what the Avatar characters would be like if they were drunk" and then I thought, "Zuko looks like a girl with his robes and long hair" and then I connected them. xD

[likeacliche]

We discussed my genius yesterday, remember? The brilliance made you make all those wonderful typos.

"the awesomeness of my review, my smartness you never knew i had towards books and writing because of the ones i read and like has astounded you so much you're spelling things wrong"