The end... Part five

[miss_shine]

Alrighty then this is part five, once again please leave comments good or bad I find them really helpful and I find it interesting to hear what you all think of my work

Comments

[grizzabella1]

I'm really enjoying this. It reads like an episode.

[miss_shine]

Thanks, for the comment. I actually wrote it as an episode and have spent years (yes actually years!!!) perfecting it. I have resently updated it so that it ties in with the events of season two, buit other then that it is something I wrote in university when season one first came out. I had foolishly thought that I could send it to the BBC and get it on TV.

[weeviltrends]

Aw poor Owen, I can only imagine how he feels about jack having the same thing Katie had...
I'm liking this fic ^^

[miss_shine]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it ;)

[xlicklelannix]

NOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wats jack gonna do to owen now and wats wrong with tosh :'(
please more soon
brilliant btw
xxx

[miss_shine]

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it