Footprints in the Sand [9/?]

[miss_soupy]

All was quiet in the white room holding the captive princess.

“Nrrrrrrrrrg."

Or at least it had been, until her stomach realized how empty it was and voiced its disapproval quite audibly.

“Oh, quiet you,” she told it, giving it a good punch to be sure.  It didn’t really take away her hunger, but it made her feel more in control at the

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[xglimpsex]

“Oh, quiet you,” she told it, giving it a good punch to be sure.
This line is so Orihime I laughed out loud.

Yay for new chapter!

[miss_soupy]

Orihime has a love/hate relationship with her stomach. I came up with that based on her trying to quiet her hunger during the S.S. arc. Didn't work then, didn't work now. hehe. Still, seeing her punch her stomach over and over...one of the most hilarious moments we have seen with her XD

[xglimpsex]

Complete and Utter Truth.
Also, I don't know why I didn't put this in the first comment, I liked houw you worked in the bit about Ulquiorra's implied strength.

About how he had to be assumed to be able to pwn anyone who'd try to mess with her.

[miss_soupy]

Yeah, I realized Orihime didn't really know his number but I needed her to be worried about him fighting her friends, specifically Ichigo. I liked how, in the manga, Orihime realized right away that Aizen didn't really trust her the way he claimed. It showed Orihime is fairly wise herself, so I wanted to show that in this chapter.