[oneshot] Sixteen

[miss_soupy]

For her sweet sixteen, she received a fractured face and an even more broken spirit.  It was also the day she first met him, but meeting him then only served to introduce her to pain and horror.  Even worse than that was the fact that she had been introduced to her own weaknesses, and they were entirely her cross to bear.  It was not his fault that

Comments

[jczala]

How should I start? Hmm... There's so many things I want to say.

The story really touched my heart. I was able to relate to the experiences and emotions that Orihime went through here. She is Sixteen and yet so many things have happened already. Fleeting as it may be, her experiences ranges from happy to traumatic.

You also did an excellent job in summing up the greatness that is UlquiHime. Descriptions were almost flawless and beautiful.

Keep up the good work.

[miss_soupy]

Thank you! I really wanted to be more analytical with this story, but I worried it would be boring because it had barely any dialogue. I'm glad that wasn't the case :D

[lovely_masoka]

Amazing. ♥

[miss_soupy]

Thanks for reading<3

[hinodeh]

I really loved this story.

Especially how the line between herself and Ulq blurrs for Orihime over time. You wrote it in such a way that it was really easy to empathize with for the reader.

This might be your best U/O fic so far.

[miss_soupy]

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! ^^

[miss_soupy]

Oh, thank you!

After all of these great responses, I suppose I should try to do more analytical types of stories more often :3