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miss_synph

Unwrap This

Aug 18, 2011 14:13

The hotel suite is dark and silent when Jason pushes open the door.

There’s clothing strewn across the floor, the remnants of Bruce’s suit and a pair of jeans that has to belong to Dick. Jason finds himself tugging nervously at the top button of his suit. He loosens the top button with slightly shaking fingers and continues walking in the ( Read more... )

character: jason todd, character: dick grayson, fandom:dc, pairing:bruce-jason-dick, character: bruce wayne

Comments 14

eternal_moonie August 18 2011, 18:46:17 UTC

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!

well done!!!

miss_synph August 19 2011, 02:19:43 UTC

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the compliment :)

stillthere4me August 18 2011, 18:48:30 UTC

Again, so so sooo much love for this!

The emotions between all three of them are portrayed so strongly here. Jason's inner voice is PERFECT. The sex is deliciously hot. And the end, with Dick clinging to Jason like a child pleading with him to come back to the manor is adorable.

Wonderful, wonderful job honey. All that hard work definitely paid off. :)

miss_synph August 19 2011, 02:28:32 UTC

I just want to roll all over your comment and bask in it forever. I was worried that I was going a bit overboard with Jason's mental voice and that it wasn't going to work well but thanks to you I'm not as worried.

As for the clingy bit with Dick at the end. I had thought of it the second that I decided on having a happy ending. Jason needs an incentive beyond excellent sex and what could be better incentive than a cuddly Dick Grayson that wants to bask in the afterglow?

I'm really glad that you liked it and honestly, it wouldn't have been finished any time soon if it hadn't been for you <3 So thank you for that, sweetie

bradygirl_12 August 18 2011, 19:07:34 UTC

Wow! HAWT and sappy and loving and delicious! Each man gets to look and sound their sexiest here. Yum! :)

miss_synph August 19 2011, 02:33:09 UTC

Eee! I'm so very happy that you enjoyed this.

I tried very hard to make sure that no one was neglected and that every character stood out on their own even during the sex scene. I'm pleased to see that you think that I did a good job.

batgurl10 August 18 2011, 20:13:11 UTC

jeezus! If DC was writing THIS---the books would be literally flying off the shelves....! SUperb my dear! MORE? I love the dynamic u created btw the 3 of them.

ladyblkrose August 20 2011, 09:43:13 UTC

Icon love, ICON Love baby!

niftywithan August 18 2011, 21:00:40 UTC

Gnnngh.

... I'll be in my bunk. ♥