Don't know how to describe it again, but heck - everything (and I mean EVERYTHING) fell decently into place. The misunderstanding between them - well, he loves her and she loves him, but they just can't be together because... she's afraid of getting hurt. It is beautiful, even - because in all honesty, that's what usually happens in real life.
Well, truth to be told, I can actually see both Neji and Tenten walling themselves - afraid of getting hurt. Especially when that involves something like this - the interpretations are wonderful!
Ah bloody hell, this made my almost cry with the bittersweet feelings it brought along.
The part "He can never make me hurt the way you do." - this almost broke me. It's written in such a realistic way, with such longing and truth underneath it's always a scary thing to read.
This is what I always loved in your Neji/Tenten fics - the reality of their love. And the last paragraph was just perfect. Words and lines of gold spilled on the paper for us to read. Just beautiful. The whole thing, actually.
(P.s - I'm a big stalker from ffc.net and now I'm going to befriend you and stalk you some more)
XD I finally got a stalker! *can now die in peace*
Thank you for such a nice review; for me one of the best parts of writing fanfic is when I manage to elicit an emotional response from readers, so your comments made me a very happy girl indeed. <3 *friends back*
... i'm still quite speechless. I love the way you've phrased and structured everything in this fic, along with the characterisation of Neji and Tenten, as well as the metaphorical use of the red thread. I loved the line,
"- but she was gone before the morning, as usual, and by the middle of next week had found someone new to forget him with."
Because, ironically and somewhat hypocritically, she goes to Neji to forget about the previous boyfriend... but the fact that she needs to make a conscious effort to forget him makes their cycle so flawed.
Also, i loved how you made their relationship so imperfect, that you did not make it another cliche and forgettable fairytale (although i have nothing against that! :D)
It's an understatement, but i love your style of writing and all of your works are absolutely amazing!
Thank you, I'm very happy that you liked it! You are waaay too kind; I didn't post this on ff.net because I thought it wasn't that good, so.....*is flattered*
That was... bloody brilliant. Yup, fucking bloody brilliant. I don't feel like elaborating, I still have to catch my breath back... Anyway, loved it, don't have anything bad to say. And too many good things to be written here. I think I'm just gonna go now... Pfiuu, you literally made my night !
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Don't know how to describe it again, but heck - everything (and I mean EVERYTHING) fell decently into place. The misunderstanding between them - well, he loves her and she loves him, but they just can't be together because... she's afraid of getting hurt. It is beautiful, even - because in all honesty, that's what usually happens in real life.
Well, truth to be told, I can actually see both Neji and Tenten walling themselves - afraid of getting hurt. Especially when that involves something like this - the interpretations are wonderful!
My, you are talented =]
Okay, enough babbling... Write more!
N.B: Would you mind if I befriend you?
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That pretty much sums up my fic, I think. My version is just a lot wordier and smuttier. ^____^
Anyway - thank you, I'm very flattered by your review. Down, ego, down! And sure, I love being friended, so go ahead. <3
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The part "He can never make me hurt the way you do." - this almost broke me. It's written in such a realistic way, with such longing and truth underneath it's always a scary thing to read.
This is what I always loved in your Neji/Tenten fics - the reality of their love. And the last paragraph was just perfect. Words and lines of gold spilled on the paper for us to read. Just beautiful. The whole thing, actually.
(P.s - I'm a big stalker from ffc.net and now I'm going to befriend you and stalk you some more)
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Thank you for such a nice review; for me one of the best parts of writing fanfic is when I manage to elicit an emotional response from readers, so your comments made me a very happy girl indeed. <3 *friends back*
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I loved the line,
"- but she was gone before the morning, as usual, and by the middle of next week had found someone new to forget him with."
Because, ironically and somewhat hypocritically, she goes to Neji to forget about the previous boyfriend... but the fact that she needs to make a conscious effort to forget him makes their cycle so flawed.
Also, i loved how you made their relationship so imperfect, that you did not make it another cliche and forgettable fairytale (although i have nothing against that! :D)
It's an understatement, but i love your style of writing and all of your works are absolutely amazing!
*Kat
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Thank you, I'm very happy that you liked it! You are waaay too kind; I didn't post this on ff.net because I thought it wasn't that good, so.....*is flattered*
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