LJ Idol Week 6 Entry

Jan 23, 2017 20:47


I was never the one to claim anything I desired as a basic right of mine. Part of me sometimes wished I was like those women in the movies, with black hair and red lipstick who were depicted as beautiful splinters broken off from the mountain of evil. They never got no as an answer and they never felt bad because of all the people they made burst ( Read more... )

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bewize January 26 2017, 18:01:10 UTC
What a painful piece. I hope this woman realizes she can do better. In fact, I hope both women realize that.

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missbinary January 28 2017, 08:54:29 UTC
Yes, I was hoping so, too while I wrote this :)

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rayaso January 26 2017, 19:53:08 UTC
This was a nice, tightly told story, with a good ending. I'm glad she deleted the message!

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missbinary January 28 2017, 08:56:47 UTC
Thank you :) Yes, it feels really good thinking that she deleted it :)

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my_name_is_jenn January 26 2017, 22:43:12 UTC
What a great take on the prompt. :)

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missbinary January 28 2017, 08:56:59 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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halfshellvenus January 27 2017, 08:30:52 UTC
beautiful splinters broken off from the mountain of evil.
I loved that description, as well as the archetype it represents.

Not only was I stuck in the nowhere between black and white queen, I was also a bit clumsy with expensive things.
And this, which has the pangs of being an ordinary person-- so ordinary!-- instead of magically gliding through life or cracking it open with a blow from one's wand.

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missbinary January 28 2017, 08:57:30 UTC
Thank you very much :-D

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n3m3sis43 January 27 2017, 14:36:58 UTC
Ouch. Sometimes it's really hard to face the darker parts of ourselves, isn't it?

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missbinary January 28 2017, 08:58:11 UTC
It is, and it is also hard to integrate them into the picture we have of ourselves :)

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