LJ Idol Season 10, Week 14

[missbinary]

ReignitionMarjorie had gotten up from her comfy seat in the well-adorned living room. A smell of fire, burning wood and other materials she could not identify had dragged her to the window. She adjusted her glasses and rubbed her aching back. It was a quiet afternoon, a little too quiet for her own taste and a part of her really welcomed the

Comments

[ragnarok_08]

Whoa, this was just fantastic!!

So evocative and very compelling :)

[i_17bingo]

You created some really fascinating characters here, as well as a satisfying end. This is fun stuff.

[shadowwolf13]

Brilliant! I love how they call come together. :)

[penpusher]

Definitely could wind up expanding and deepening this piece, there's a lot of intriguing element untapped here, and potential for some fascinating observation about life suggested.

[adoptedwriter]

This was great! Is it part of a bigger story?