Cos, y'know, everyone's doing it:
Put a number in the comments and I’ll answer accordingly. The mission for those of us who answer the questions, should we accept it, is to stay positive about our writing and ourselves, but to also be fair about our shortcomings.1. Of the fic you’ve written, of which are you most proud
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This extract (HIGHLY unpolished, so please forgive me) is from Becoming 'Dad' - an AU fic that wonders "What if Rimmer found out that Yvonne was pregnant with his child before she left Red Dwarf? What if, when she resigned and left the ship, he followed her?
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“Smegging hell! Did you know that - when fully dilated - a woman’s cervix stretches to 10cm?”
Yvonne rocked from foot to foot, grinding down the tiles with each step. Taking a deep drag on the gas and air, she wrenched away the mouthpiece with audible reluctance, fighting to keep her voice measured.
“Arnold?”
“Hmm?”
“Put the book down before I insert it somewhere that renders you fully dilated. This is not the time for last-minute revision.”
“Right. Of course.”
Rimmer stashed away his copy of Surviving the First Year and scuttled across to the bed where his ex-colleague/unconfirmed-partner/imminent-mother-of-his-child stood.
He remembered Chapter 3 well. Birth - How to Help Your Partner Cope. It had been well-thumbed and well-deliberated in his ( ... )
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I should probably take it as a compliment. ;) I'm not really a competitive writer; I do it for fun. :)
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That's the only piece of concrit I've had that I recall and that has stuck with me. And I'm damn grateful for it.
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In terms of slash, I rather like "No Other Blue" - mostly because of the positive reception it received. ^__^
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