Comments | missflyer: Of the Darkness

missflyer

Oct 11, 2015 22:21

Brigit's Flame, October week 1, "darkness". Haiku, 13 words.

Sunbeams hide outside
of a starry cloak of night -
Watch me come alive.

Comments 4

darlinleo October 16 2015, 00:22:40 UTC

I like "starry cloak of night". Looking forward to some of your stories soon :D

missflyer October 19 2015, 21:38:06 UTC

Thanks! I'm hoping to get more writing time in. Especially since I no longer have internet to get lost in at home, haha.

haikuuu jlly_coppercorn October 16 2015, 23:14:12 UTC

I like cloaks of darkness :)
Nice haiku.

Re: haikuuu missflyer October 19 2015, 21:38:37 UTC

Thanks, jlly! :)

I'm expanding on that cloak this month~