The Winner Takes It All

Sep 06, 2010 15:50

Title: The Winner Takes It All
Fandom: Glee
Characters: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 2,783
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Rachel always gets what she wants, but sometimes life takes some twists and turns.
Author's Note: There is some angst here. If you don't like angst, please feel free to not read this story. No one is holding a gun to your head. Sorry ( Read more... )

noah puckerman, fic, rachel berry, glee

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misshigherpower September 6 2010, 21:34:44 UTC
Thank you! This almost ended differently, but I couldn't do it. I'm a sucker for the happy ending.

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kimmy_77 September 6 2010, 21:55:42 UTC
I'm not a real big fan of angst but I have enjoyed everything of yours that I've read so I gave this a chance. It was beautiful.

On a very personal level everything that Noah and Rachel went through to have their baby my husband and I have gone through, without getting a baby. And I feel like you wrote both Noah and Rachel's emotions just perfectly. My husband and I have been in the situaion where you have to have the conversation "if something goes wrong who do you save?". It's a heartbreaking conversation and you did an excellent job.

I'm glad that Noah doesn't have to live without either of them. :)

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misshigherpower September 6 2010, 22:21:38 UTC
I'm so sorry for your heartbreak.

Thanks for reading my story, especially considering you're not a fan of the angst. Much appreciated. :)

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misshigherpower September 7 2010, 04:05:41 UTC
Thank you! Coming from someone who writes so well, it really means a lot.

Yeah, ff.net is cracky. I think this was really just the straw that broke the camel's back. And it's a real shame because it ruins it for other people, when we have to get all hardcore about reviewing.

Thanks again for reading.

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Complaints??? puh-lease puckleberryluv7 October 2 2010, 08:40:55 UTC
I have no complaints about the angst in this story. I actually read it on ff.net but never actually got around to commenting it because typing on my blackberry is annoying sometimes. anywho. I've navigated more toward livejournal now because I noticed that ff.net has a lot of mean people on who will just flame your story for no good reason or will trash you as a writer and I really don't appreciate that because it takes a lot of guts to post a story up for anyone to read. Anyways, don't listen to anyone who tells you negative things about your writing, I think you are a wonderful writer and I love all of your stories that I've read so far. [You'll have to forgive me for not having read all of them yet because I just created my account 2 or 3 days ago.]

I always love a little angst if it has a happy ending. ;)

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greydawning December 4 2010, 22:21:00 UTC
Okay, so I don't know why I've only read this now but this is amazing. Personally, a girl's gotta get her angst once in a while, you know - it clears out the tear ducts ;) And you do it oh-so-well.

I don't know what else to say except ♥♥♥

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