For the sake of YaMaki - Third Person

May 12, 2009 22:34


Just a small piece for you guys to apologize for not updating recently.
I promise I'll be much better now that I'm on summer break. :)
and i have a lot of stuff to give you guys.

Title: Third Person
Pairing: insinuated yamaki
Rating: PG
Word Count: 842
Summary: The only way you know someone is in love is when you are the one sitting on the outside ( Read more... )

one shot, yamaki

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A beginners guid to being a third wheel catslove17 May 17 2009, 02:49:44 UTC
Wow I just caught a glimpse at redsn0wflakes's comment! There is no way I could beat that in length, so I'll just quietly admire in my own.

How very interesting that you've written the fic from Masami's point of view, since she's so widely hated in our Yamaki circles, but of course she gets her "comeuppance" (though I think I'm being too cruel), and you write her in such a way that I can't help but feel sorry for her, and want her to be with Pi a little too. You're much too talented May.

Oh and Toma! I'm glad he made his little entrance. It's not a party if Toma's not invited eh?

First name basis?!!!! EEK! Yes. First name basis without the honorifics. That's how I'd like to see their relationship.

I do love your Yamaki, there's a certain quality to it that none can compete with. *sigh* So I'm glad that you wrote not only this, but your Aizawa/Maki piece, and so close together too! A big bang eh!

And it's your birthday soon ................. must think of something to do. It's so hard impressing someone like you.

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rengganis June 17 2009, 13:48:06 UTC
BIG OUCH for Masami. LOL.
I can't help feeling sorry for her, but hey don't messed up with our OTP, right?
I love your subtle bashing ;-)

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chooseylover31 August 11 2009, 00:30:12 UTC
it's lovely... sometimes, you really can't see how much two people are in love if you're inside that relationship... other people see it so much more.

and i have this thing against Masami.. gomen to her fans. i guess i'm just too biased... hahaha..

but i wonder why you chose her to be the third wheel?

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