i know, i know...its been a long time. i'll promise i'll be doing some updating soon.
but i wanted to get this up since it's inspired by the horrible fact that our dearest Yamapi and Ryo have caught influenza type A.
Our babies are sick and i know we are all completely worried.
I'm praying for them to get better soon. But I feel like this is also
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haha~ i'm so glad you have something in here! ^^
i hope RyoPi gets well soon~~
and oh.. Maki-chan being all worried and Pi being all protective.
you nailed it!
i also found a dislike for doors. lol
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and thank you soo much!
i wanted to write a not so cliche version of a cliche theme, pi being sick and maki playing nurse. lol.
hopefully it worked out well.
thank you again ♥
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ah yes, the sad news of Pi and Ryo cathing A(H1N1).
Hope they get better!
yes and Maki should take care of Pi but then she'd catch the virus too.
haha!
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my brain does this thing where blocks everything cohorent when i want to write xD. stupid writer's block. but hopefully im slipping my way back into writer's mode.
i also hope they get better! Two popular Johnny's with the flu...the whole female population in japan is probably on a riot. =P
But thank you soo much for reading! ♥
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I don't know if you intended it to read like this, but I thought the story was kind of a case of unreliable narrator.
As in, it started off really intense, and I thought it as if she'd done something really wrong or he'd done something stupid to get her angry ... but then it just turned out that he didn't want her to get his germs! : P
I thought it was super cool, and super cute : )
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So don't even worry about commenting or even reading. Just remember we're all here when you want to get away from your world!
I'm glad you like the piece, even though its a little misleading xD. =)
thank you for reading it and i lovers u. ♥
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I am so sorry it came out otherwise and reading your work is the least I can do after you worked so hard to write it.
The fault is all mine and please don't think me ungrateful. I lve you so mch and am so unbeliavably lucky to have you.
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LOL i wasn't the least bit offended by your comment at all, i dont see anything wrong with it! So don't apologize, I think I understood what you meant.
And even if there was criticism in there, I really do appreciate it more -- it only lets me know where to improve. I don't care even if you told me the piece sucked!! it's enough to know that Neko-ai took time out in order to read it. And that really flatters me.
I really do miss you. And I think we both know, that I'm the luckier one in this case to have Neko-ai even worry about making me feel bad! (which i didn't feel bad at all, just to be sure).
Thanks for 'clearing up' even though you didn't need to. =) you really are the sweetest. I hope I can catch you online again soon! ♥
loveeeers you.
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I love all your sweet love story for yamaki
it's totally damn good
love it so much
and I can't stop reading it
Love when yamapi said that he started to hate the door
hahahha~
very sweet
thanks for sharing
anyhow~keep writing
your writing makes yamaki's love alive
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