Fic: Witness Protection (12/13)
Title: Witness Protection
Author: missilemuse.
Part: 12/13
Wordcount: ~3630 in this part. (~32,630 in all)
Rating: PG-13 (may go up later)
Warnings: none.
Spoilers: for dialogue from season 2.
Disclaimer: Sherlock and John belong to ACD's grey cells, and each other in that order... Although the B.B.C. version receives full credit for inspiring me to put ( Read more... )
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Between Lestrade and John there's ample proof that you don't need to be a genius to be clever and badass. XD Although Jim has a /nice/ forewarning system to give him enough time to get out of the building before the SAS gets in. The way he does so is just perfectly him.
Whew, glad to see them all alive and probably-well-given-time.
John meet Mycroft. Oops. There's no way that /that/ can go wrong. ^^ But him standing up to
Holmes the Elder (for a given value of "standing") is always satisfying.
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I said this with the previous chapters, but I really do admire your gift for intricate plotting and careful pacing. You do a wonderful job of maintaining the fast-paced action and tension in the aftermath of the shooting. It seems so typical of Moriarty to be moved to laughter, even though his plans are falling apart. Loved "Note to self- Take Moran’s suggestions a bit more seriously in the future" and "Oh, dear, dear Johnny boy! Was it a wonder that he had almost married him?" I also think it's great that Moran is intelligent enough to realize that John should be kept alive as future leverage against Sherlock and that he can't help admiring John enough to want to kill him in a fair fight ( ... )
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