SasuNaru - Sparring - 1/1

[missingairmail]

Title: Sparring 1/1
Author: missingairmail
Pairing: SasuNaru if you want to see it.
Rating: PG - 13 Mild language and licking, but it's not explicit. *smiles*
Word Count: 1,228
Warnings: This is a rather difficult style to read, so if you don't like what you see in the exert, it'd be best to turn around. Sorry to those who don't like it; this is the easiest and

Comments

[wardrum]

oh I like this one. XD I've recently developed a fascination with present-tense writing, so this was a treat.
lovely, lovely writing style, and your character-writing is spot-on. mem'ing.

[missingairmail]

Thank you! I really like reading in the present tense too, so I thought I'd write one so others could enjoy it as well. Thanks again for mem'ing this! *smiles happily*

[saracakes]

That was good. Really descriptive. :)
I really liked the part when the 'he sucks up the noodle too quickly and the soup rebounds onto his cheek.'

Which is true with everyone. xD Nice. :) x

[missingairmail]

Thank you~!
XDD Yeah, that happens to me a lot too o_o;; It burnssss :C

Thanks again for the lovely comment ^^

[saracakes]

Oh yes, burning sensation. xD

You're very welcome~ :D