SasuNaruSasu - Scratch - 1/1

[missingairmail]

Title: Scratch 1/1
Author: missingairmail
Pairing: SasuNaruSasu
Rating: PG 13 - self mutilation.
Word Count: 409
Warnings: Can be interpreted as shounen-ai, self mutilation, weird form of 'torture-hurt'. Um. It's not a pretty fiction.
Comments: Uh, I really don't know where this came from. :'D;; It's really not good for young eyes/minds, and it's a little...

Comments

[dollhouse__x]

aughhh

i cringed at this. the eyes are rarely written about in self mutilation fics. and I could actually almost EXPERIENCE it. god, dkfjdk *shivers* which makes this all the more unique.

but mostly i cried (on the inside 8D;) for naruto. <3 im a happy ending kinda girl, but because im a masochist for some reason i always read angsty fics. this was very beautiful, and damn sasuke plz just give naruto a hugg already DDDD:

[missingairmail]

XD~ I'm going to hope that is a good 'aughhh'?

Yeah, I noticed that. It's usually wrists or arms or legs or whatever, but that can only go so far before it gets boring;; Hey, be the change you want to see, right?
You can feel it? Uwah, it doesn't hurt, does it? D:

XDD! Yeah, I think we're all thinking that on the inside~ For some reason, I write better angst!SasuNaru than I do fluff!SasuNaru. Maybe I should work on that....? ;>

[dollhouse__x]

Yes that was a VERY GOOD augghhhh. its the sound of a masochist getting what she wants *shot*

Yah its always wrists especially. but that really just turns me off. because then it's kind of like "oh me so sad. emoemoemeo" which.. no. Change is good, most of the time :]. In this fics case, it's really good <3

8DD ahhhh in fact to recover from this im like drawing a picture of them two embracing.. or something. because im like really affected by this fic for some reason and it wont leave my minnnd D8 ~ (its a good thing? :DD)

Ah well, do whatever you want :]. If you wrote fluffy sasunaru of course i wouldn't mind, but if you like writing angsty more, ill read that devotedly as well >D

[missingairmail]

XDD Oh myyy. It almost sounds like a zombie.

Emo fics =/= angst fics and emo fics =/= good self mutilation fics. >: and I'm glad~! I've never had such gushing praise for something so dark XDD;;

XD Really?? Yay~ I never knew just a ficlet could affect someone so much. <3 May I see it if you do end up drawing them? I'd love to see what my work can inspire, even if it's a feel better drawing. XD

Aw, thank you! That's so sweet D: <3! I'll be sure to keep that in mind. <3 Maybe I'll even dedicate my next fluff ficlet to you ;D

[aethakitten]

Eeep. That was...different o.o
Not good to read on a depressed day anywho XD
But I was seriously not expecting that, it makes a refreshing change. It was really good! I liked it a lot!! :)

*shudder* eyeeeessss. I think that's gonna stick with me most of the day D:

[missingairmail]

Uwah! I didn't make you... more depressed did I? D:;; I hope not;;
But I'm glad you liked it! I was a little worried about how this would be received, considering the topic and style and all. Thanks for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate it~

XD Yeah, I'm getting that a lot. Don't try this at home, okay? ><;;

[aethakitten]

No of course not <3
Ahhh, dont be worried, everyone loves a bit o' angst now and again. Especially interesting, well-written angst ;)

It reminds me of a bit in 28 weeks later, where someone sticks their thumbs in the zombie's eyes XD; ... I'm a zombie nerd XD

[missingairmail]

Oh thank goodness;; I like writing angst, but it worries me sometimes because I don't want anyone feel depressed because of it;; >:
Thank you~ You're too kind ♥ ;;

....Oh myyy. XD Now I'm tempted and want to try it out. D: It reminds me of that parody that Matt Groening did of 'Frosty the Snowman' of this zombie who had toes for eyes.
It was sexeh. :B
It's okay, I am too! ♥

[transient_words]

Wow, I am bordering between being flabberghasted and completely in awe. Your imagery is gorgeous, your writing style brilliant and this is piece is challenging and refreshing; the language you have used is fantastic and the poetic- rhythmic style is ingenious (you have a very distinctive and interesting writing style). I am truly impressed and that's why I am gushing that much. You deserve the praise

[missingairmail]

You have no idea how happy that made me. <3 Every time I wrote something, I always wait for your review before I can actually feel assured that I did a good job. <3 It's... well, I'm not sure what it is about your reviews that always make me so happy to write more, but I'm guessing it has to do with the fact that they're always detailed and clear, letting me know exactly what you like (and what you don't?). I just feel so giddy every time I read your comments! XD;;

No, I'd love to see what sort of impression this left on you! Hey, I'm writing for you guys, so of course I'd want to know how you feel after reading, despite the fact the descriptions may end up being weird interpretations, yeah? And thanks. You're always too kind with your reviews. <3

[saracakes]

That was...different. O_O;

My eye is burning!! XDD hsajk.

Nuu, Naruto's pretty eyeeeee <3
This was very different. Very.
What the hell, *knocks your head* what's going on in there?!
Though, twas good.
My eyyyyyyyyyyyyeeee *rubs it*

[missingairmail]

XDD Yeah, I like to write 'different' fanfics. <3

I know~ I was almost reluctant to hurt that pretty blue, which is why I put that beginning bit in x3
XD I have no idea~ I do get the feeling there is tea party though, with eye-sandwiches and other disturbing little trinkets ready to be served and freak all my readers out :D
Thank you! <3 And sorry for hurting your eye? D: Eeg, I hope it doesn't hurt TOO much? <3;;

[saracakes]

LOL! It's fine, it's fine.

Keep up with the good work~ <3 :D

[missingairmail]

Will do~! x>

*Sniff*

[neeree]

That's gotta hurt...actually i know that hurts because my eye was injured when i was little. ( no worries its all better now :P)

I really love/hate this oneshot though.
Love it cause its written so well and so unique but hate the fact that Naruto is a self-mutilating bum. Actually I usually like a self mutilating Naruto - makes him seam like less of an idiot but here he went to far. He permanatly damaged himself!!!!....and then later hurt Sasuke. though I really likes that, super angsty XD
LOVES the last line!!!

Re: *Sniff*

[missingairmail]

I'm glad you're better! I'd hate to have my EYE injured, of all things ><;; Hope it didn't hurt TOO much o_o;;

XDD;; I'm glad that you hate/love it? x> The eye thing actually wasn't supposed to be permanent... Would it make you rest easier at night knowing that the Kyuubi eventually finds out how to fix the eye? XD
And thaaanks. ♥ I'm glad I haven't been attacked by any rabid Sasuke fangirls yet o_o;; Double hurt mutilation fic? It's been received WAY better than I thought it would XD
Thanks for taking the time to comment! <3 I really appreciate it :3~

Re: *Sniff*

[red_fangs]

I figured that Kyuubi would heal Naruto but what about Sasuke. Sasuke's eyes are like his pride. it would suck if he never got his fixed.

Re: *Sniff*

[missingairmail]

Mm, that's a good point. Well, Naruto being Naruto, once he sees that Sasuke's eye doesn't fix itself, he'd probably drag Sasuke to the hospital or something to get it fixed. And hey, if you're really worried about the probability of that situation, I never DID say that Sasuke's eye was broken - only that a piece of his iris was missing, so~
It's all interpretation. ♥