A riot inside (Prompt: Nostalgia)

[otterandterrier]

 

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[otterandterrier]

:D Happy to do so! Thanks for your review ^-^

Oh, I'll edit it and add spaces, shall I? I had to edit it because... long story, but I'll go again ;P

[missingdhmods]

You're welcome.

It's up to you, but it would make it easier to read after you worked so hard on it. Thanks again.

[missingdhmods]

Thanks so much for posting our first DH missing moment drabble! Yay!

I like how you brought out all that he misses from the Burrow, all the things going through his mind. Enjoyed that. And, well... I love Ron.

I had difficultly reading it; a couple lines appear as missing - maybe it's my browser, thanks IE. It all seems very close together, I think because there are no lines in between paragraphs, and my eyes are older (like the rest of me isn't.

[willow_wand]

I thought you showcased the prompt well by showing all the things that Ron was homesick for. I liked that you used the senses to show the smells, tastes, sounds, etc of the Burrow. Nicely done! :)

[otterandterrier]

Thanks, glad you liked it! ^-^

[francaise3]

Loved it! I thought it was a nice touch to show that Ron appreciated the Burrow, the thing he had, when he used think he had nothing.

[otterandterrier]

Thanks! I think that journey really helped him appreciate more what he had, after all ^-^

[lectura35]

I really like this honest picture about Ron and his feelings. He had a wonderful home... and, with all that little details, you showed very well how he finally noticed it :)

[otterandterrier]

Thank you, Mely! I wanted to do something that didn't include Harry and Hermione (at least not in a possitive way) and focuse on the things Ron thought of when his mind was more or less clear ^-^

[lectura35]

"Those little details". Ups ;)