Drabble: Missing Remus

Oct 04, 2010 14:03

Prompts: Nostalgia, Excitement, Regret
Title: Missing Remus
Author: Mollywheezy
Characters/Ship: Tonks/Remus
Rating/Warning: PG-13
Word Count: 497

Missing Remus )

nostalgia, excitement

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otterandterrier October 4 2010, 22:54:15 UTC
This was so lovely, and you used all of the prompts!
I loved Tonk's thoughts and realizations, how she's trying to grow up and become a mum from the beginning. Great job!

It's also funny because my drabble for 'regret' is also RL/NT and I'd never written about them before :P

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mollywheezy October 5 2010, 12:18:43 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D

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honourweasley12 October 5 2010, 06:59:20 UTC
I really liked your Tonks - I think you captured her voice well, especially her youth, her fears, and her developing sense of motherhood. Her nickname for Teddy was adorable.

There is also a hint of bittersweet emotion, which is something I always feel when it comes to R/T fics.

Great job using all of the prompts, as well!

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mollywheezy October 5 2010, 12:20:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think I captured Tonks well. :)

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lectura35 October 5 2010, 16:12:53 UTC
I just adore your Tonks!
You did a wonderful job mixing her anxiety, love, and honesty with the three prompts :)
Great job!

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