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bendleshnitz1 October 17 2010, 20:00:10 UTC
Very sweet!
I loved Ron's comment about berries at the end and he pointing out Hermione being obsessed about not being obsessed with the Hallows. Great use of the prompt :)

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otterandterrier October 17 2010, 23:46:20 UTC
Thank you! Haha, I had to be creative, since the Hallows were the only thing I associated with an obsession :P

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lectura35 October 17 2010, 21:38:42 UTC
Uh... well, then you know what I mean. That's what my dad's always said about Muggles, that it's hard for them to believe in certain things. I've often wondered how was it that you believed.'

'I had to. It was the only viable explanation for what was happening to me,'

Truly beautiful lines for such a beautiful drabble :)

Really clever and original use for the prompt, Dessi!

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otterandterrier October 17 2010, 23:50:56 UTC
Thanks, Mely! :D

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mollywheezy October 22 2010, 18:15:21 UTC
I love Ron in this, especially his hopeful comment about finding more berries. I can completely picture this conversation happening. Great job!

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otterandterrier October 26 2010, 15:36:01 UTC
Haha, I reckon he tried to make up for the whole 'I-need-food' mayhem he caused :P
Thank you!

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pigwithhair October 22 2010, 19:27:00 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Really well done! I especially liked Ron's 'That you're obsessed about not being obsessed with them...'

You worked in both Hermione's and Harry's obsessions as well as some good insight into Ron and Hermione's changing relationship and Ron's new maturity. I think this is the best of yours I've read yet. I'm going back and reading it again... lots to enjoy here.

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otterandterrier October 26 2010, 15:37:39 UTC
Oh, thank you! I love your review ^-^

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