Tail of Maids [original story]

[missingkitsune]

TITLE: Tail of Maids
COMMENTS: Just something I felt like writing. I've been blocked on my regular writing so this was a little side idea that got into my head. Unbeta'd so all mistakes are mine alone.

Women were said to be bad luck on ships and the sailors would throw them overboard. What would happen to them after that?

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Comments

[duck113]

good premise, just needs a bit more closure regarding the boy. Nice job!

[missingkitsune]

Yeah I thought about that. I may work on a revision or a bonus at some point.
Thank you.

[helliongoddess]

I wouldn't say it needs closure, I'd say it's a great first chapter for what could be a much longer tale (no pun intended!). There's a lot of potential of where you could go with it from here, including what happens with the boy. I really like it, and I'd love to see you really take off with it.