short story, first draft

[missjenji]

Comments

[jeremotion]

I'd ask if you wrote this to disprove Monte's "Jennie can't write sexy" joke, but I see here it was posted hours earlier. I like it though. Romantic and sad at the same time.

Although I swear to God, if this story ends with them about to "have the sex" and then they have to stop because she's injured, AGAIN, I will light you on fire.

[missjenji]

Heh. I appreciate that my little joke has survived in your memory for so long.

And I don't know if the characters in this story have sex that night or not. I choose not to write it into into the story because it wouldn't be as good an ending. This story is less about sex and more about closeness.

[jeremotion]

I actually think it would be very hard for them to have sex without breaking the somber mood you created. I was, just to be clear, just joking.