jshghsdhn... SO FRUSTRATED... sgohsobagu

[missjif]

So, English is driving me mad.. I am over my word count already and I am tired. BUT.. this is my creative writing shit, and when Mrs Johnson read it she told me it was too confusing with all the different horses = but, i think it makes sense with the different ages - anyhow, could people please tell me whether it makes any sense, or whether it is

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[sezza9]

I love.
Well done m'dear!!
:D

[soph_soap]

wow. well done. honestly, what makes it so good is that it's in the perfect style as all those books that you have.
just watch out: “you and I, we we’re meant to fly”...extra we.
but i'm impressed...you'll get good marks for that because it emulates the style so well.

[missjif]

Shall change that now... thank you m'dear!