Help_Japan *practice* fic Round 1

Apr 20, 2011 12:58

The wonderful and amazing smithereen prompted "I always liked that one prompt on the kinkmeme where Stéphane starts hitting on Johnny for real, but Johnny thinks it's just Stéphane being all touchy-snuggly like always so he doesn't get that no, these are the MOVES and he is PUTTING THEM ON NOW ( Read more... )

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smithereen June 9 2011, 03:28:48 UTC
Ahahahahaha. He's content instead to just have his nipples, IMMEDIATELY PERFECT. Right out of the gate. BRB again.

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smithereen June 9 2011, 03:49:28 UTC
Okay, like there was any doubt but I LOVED IT. Just... hand-holding and Stephane trying so hard and Johnny's earmuffs and misunderstandings (eating at the hotel would be too embarrassing. heeeee!) It's really adorable and funny and so cute. But I also love the angsty underpining you gave it. The thing about Johnny being tired of being single. And the way he keeps pulling away and trying so hard not to let himself feel his feelings. I love that bit where he closes the door at the end of the date and just hates his hotel room. That whole undercurrent of loneliness. You gave it such a lovely depth that wasn't really in the prompt. And then there were make-outs, and it was SO GREAT. The whole thing is totally charming and wonderful, and I'm sorry I didn't realize it was here until now!

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misskittye June 9 2011, 13:45:20 UTC
<3 <3 <3 LOL, I looked back at the post and sorry about mithering so much for your praise. I AM glad you like it, though!! (You are too sweet!)

SIGH. Johnny and Stephane. I unironically hope they get married someday.

(PS I miss your writing like I miss breathing.)

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