Do I Have to Put my Handcuffs on Ya, Mama?

[misskittye]

Title: Do I Have to Keep You Under Lock and Key?
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC-17 for sex and language
Word Count: 6.5k
Warnings: Consensual use of restraints feature in this story.
Summary: Not a lot of plot to this one. Let's just say Steve really doesn't handle the whole Danny moving out/handcuffing himself to someone

Comments

[tess_faulkner]

Holy fucking hell that is hot.

I love everything about this fic but particularly Steve, because I love me some seriously dominant Steve, and god yours is amazing.

I only had one minor problem that has nothing to do with your actual writing--for some reason, whenever you use italics, it changes the colour of the text to a paler grey colour that's a bit hard on the eyes. Just thought I should mention it. ^^;

Totally saved this to my memories for future happy re-reading~

[misskittye]

Thank you for reading! I'm really glad you liked it, and I really appreciate the comment! I love bossy pants Steve, too, and I love that Danny makes usually makes him fight for every inch, too.

As for the formatting issue, I went ahead and changed the theme of my journal to fix the italics change. It was an embellishment from a theme I got from a comm a long while back. It was time for a change, and this journal is becoming more and more just an archive. So if it's not readable it's not a very good archive!

BUT another tip (don't know if you already know it) is the style=mine tag. Just put ?style=mine at the end of anyone's journal entry URL (right after .html) and it should switch to your own theme which presumably is easy on your eyes. Handy to have sometimes.

[tess_faulkner]

Oooooh, I had no idea about that tag! =D Thanks a bunch for that tip!

[americandirrty]

Wow I love this so much. So perfect.

[misskittye]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[crossmymind]

Um if someone can teach me how to breathe again, that would be great thanks. Holy fuck. I just. Yeahhh.

[misskittye]

Ha! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for commenting. And I hope you got that breathing thing sorted out. ;)

[annieke]

Unh, so good. Smoothly written, smoking hot. Love Steve in this, love Danny in this. Love the cuffs. Love Danny in the cuffs--and Kono's, "they're doing it again," just awesome. Didn't understand the German train comment, though. Anyway, verry nice. Off to read again.

[misskittye]

Thank you! Really glad you enjoyed it! And thank you very much for the comment.

The German train bit is slang that I'm realizing is a little less popular than I thought it was. It's something like "punctual as a German train." I mean it like, "Steve's always on schedule, like a German train." Hope that clears it up for you a little.

[finduilas_clln]

Holy... *takes cold shower*

So fucking hot!

[misskittye]

Haha, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!