Lost and Found

Jan 19, 2007 21:37


Something I wrote a few months ago for my creative writing class. I think it's decent. Tell me what yoooou think. ;D

Our ignorance was tangible as his breath coated my neck and his lips inched down my throat to my barely pubescent collarbone. I had imagined handpicked orchids laced over linens. I had pictured smooth skin sculpting into a timeless ( Read more... )

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mylackoftact January 20 2007, 14:15:05 UTC
I like it, very visual.

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