Phillies

Feb 04, 2013 11:05

Title: Phillies
Rating: All Ages
Characters: The whole team in an AU 1942.
Pairing: hints of Clint/Natasha
Summary: In an all-night dinner, a bond is formed among six individuals.

Author’s Notes: I am taking a creative writing class and our first story had to be based on one of five paintings. I chose Edward Hopper’s Nighthawks. I last visited the ( Read more... )

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shenshen77 February 4 2013, 19:40:23 UTC
This was lovely, a great character study. And I love the painting you based this on :D

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misssara11 February 11 2013, 19:48:43 UTC
Thanks so much! I love it too, that made this easier to write.

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franztastisch February 4 2013, 19:49:35 UTC
This is all sorts of wonderful. And I love that painting, and really wish I could see the original one day.

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misssara11 February 11 2013, 19:49:24 UTC
Thank you, I've been lucky enough to see it several times in person. I hope you get the chance too.

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orange_crushed February 5 2013, 00:37:22 UTC
But they were not in love.

YES THEY WERE OH MY GOD

This was so lovely, I'm really glad you shared it. I like the idea of all these lost souls finding each other!

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misssara11 February 11 2013, 19:49:59 UTC
THEY WERE TOTALLY IN LOVE!

It works, right? I mean, you're the art expert here!

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jacedesbff February 5 2013, 01:13:57 UTC
Beautifully done! (I want to hear how you do on your grade, b/c it should be fabulous!)

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misssara11 February 11 2013, 19:50:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm still waiting to find out my grade, I hope it's good too!

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aibhinn February 5 2013, 03:20:45 UTC
Nicely done--you've captured the essence of the characters in totally different people. (Natasha sings in a nightclub? But somehow, I can see it.) I think I love the paragraph about Clint and Natasha most of all--you capture them so perfectly there. Beautiful. Well done you!

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misssara11 February 11 2013, 19:52:03 UTC
For the sake of this (and the fact that Scarlett sings), yes she is a nightclub singer! Not much call for master assassin in this AU. Thank you! It's been a long time since I've written anything, it's nice to know folks think I haven't lost my touch.

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