Comments | misstakin: YA fanfic

misstakin

YA fanfic

Feb 05, 2011 16:19

Another post from me today but this is important THIS IS FANFICTION.

Title: [idek yet who wants to help me with this one]
Fandom: Marvel//Young Avengers
Characters/Pairings: Kate/Eli/Tommy. Yes.
Length: 2,223 motherfuckin' words.
Summary: Kate, Eli and Tommy are trying to work out how to function in a polyamorous relationship. Unsurprising to ( Read more... )

things adri writes, *marvel (comics)

Comments 17

I like it jazzypom February 5 2011, 22:03:03 UTC

The rivalry, and the fact that Eli and Tommy suck it up and deal. Go, Kate. Git it, git it.

Re: I like it misstakin February 5 2011, 22:05:56 UTC

She "wears the pants" so to speak.

LOL, I see what you did there jazzypom February 5 2011, 22:10:04 UTC

But really, the story worked. I only wished that Kate's pov was a bit more immediate, but I did like the push and pull of Eli and Tommy and how the story had the push and tug going through it.

Cheers for this.

(; misstakin February 5 2011, 22:15:22 UTC

Thanks! I realised a bit after the fact that her POV should have been constant, but this whole thing started with that first scene and I liked it so much and I honestly thought the whole thing was going to go in a different direction story-telling-wise. WHAT CAN YOU DO.

Thread 5

mozzarellaroses February 5 2011, 23:49:16 UTC

I squee.
THIS is how the relationship is supposed to work. THIS is how I like it.
Not Eli/Kate
not Tommy/Kate
but Eli/Kate/Tommy. THIS. :D

mozzarellaroses February 5 2011, 23:49:41 UTC

Can I encourage you to write more of this OT3?

misstakin February 5 2011, 23:54:08 UTC

LMAO I will need time and... inspiration. This only came about because I had been talking about how much I love the OT3.

mozzarellaroses February 5 2011, 23:57:39 UTC

.... The relationship and how it works on the field? :D

misstakin February 5 2011, 23:58:21 UTC

The next time I'm bedridden for a week (;

Thread 5

ration February 6 2011, 00:25:04 UTC

this is beautiful

so beautiful

/smashes face into it

misstakin February 6 2011, 00:27:17 UTC

the only thing it is lacking is smut amirite

ration February 6 2011, 00:35:53 UTC

there is always time for a sequel :'|

misstakin February 6 2011, 00:38:43 UTC

that there is

ohohohohohohohohohohohohohoho

amethyst_amore February 6 2011, 02:25:21 UTC

There are n words to describe how much I love this story. Kate can't be without her boys and they just have to deal with it. The results are awesome and hilarious.

misstakin February 6 2011, 02:26:21 UTC

Thank you! lmao yeah I quite like their dynamic, obviously