I think there's about four misuses. I only recently learnt that 'it's' isn't right for when something belongs to it. Doesn't make much sense to me, but hey!
When you had him say that he was there, I thanked you, out loud, THAT'S what I expected him to say on the show.
And I love your therapy session, I love the insight into her head/hear you gives us. Everything feels so right, it doesn't seem like a fic, I'm gonna have a hard time remembering this isn't what happened in Rise.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you feel like this fits in with the canon well. I was so annoyed that we didn't get to hear him respond to her 'Everyone's gone' cos there's no way he didn't say something.
Hee, I'm definitely tempted to do something for Haven after that finale! We'll see what happens ;D
The lyrics of the song are so perfectly appropriate.
I love how you opened and closed with Kate and voices, and her dreams.
And thank-you for taking on her time away with her dad (a 2hr episode would have allowed for a better recovery time, particularly scenes of Kate and her dad).
(Time speeds up without her permission. She doesn't mean for it to become three months later, it just does.)
I do believe that this was true for her, that she didn't deliberately stay away that long.
These things take time. I've been writing mine for almost a year now, can you believe it? And it still isn't finished. The end is causing me all kinds of headaches. Final chapters suck. Can't wait to read yours, though!
But you kind of have an excuse because your is epically long! Mine is only about 3000 words lol. I've had it almost completely written for ages but I just keep fiddling with it cos I'm not 100% sure I'm happy with it. But I think that might just be nerves and I need to just get over it and post.
Seriously though, how quickly has this year flown by?! It's insane. Good luck with your final chapter, I know you can pull it together!
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And as usual, loved this. It filled in all the cracks of moments I really wanted to see in the episode. ♥
(One little niggle. 'It's' only has the apostrophe when short for 'it is'. Otherwise it's just 'its'.)
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Fixed the it's/its. I hate not catching those things. Thanks for pointing it out!
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I think there's about four misuses. I only recently learnt that 'it's' isn't right for when something belongs to it. Doesn't make much sense to me, but hey!
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When you had him say that he was there, I thanked you, out loud, THAT'S what I expected him to say on the show.
And I love your therapy session, I love the insight into her head/hear you gives us. Everything feels so right, it doesn't seem like a fic, I'm gonna have a hard time remembering this isn't what happened in Rise.
And now.. What about a post-finale Haven fic?
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Hee, I'm definitely tempted to do something for Haven after that finale! We'll see what happens ;D
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I love how you opened and closed with Kate and voices, and her dreams.
And thank-you for taking on her time away with her dad (a 2hr episode would have allowed for a better recovery time, particularly scenes of Kate and her dad).
(Time speeds up without her permission. She doesn't mean for it to become three months later, it just does.)
I do believe that this was true for her, that she didn't deliberately stay away that long.
This would merge into canon seamlessly.
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I would really have loved to see more of her recovery and especially time with her dad but alas.
I'm glad you think it would merge into canon well, that's definitely what I was aiming for.
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ps. How's the LtM fic going? :)
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It is incredibly close to being finished! Oh my gosh, you've been soooo patient with me. It's my next priority for sure though, promise.
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Seriously though, how quickly has this year flown by?! It's insane. Good luck with your final chapter, I know you can pull it together!
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