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andsheloves July 22 2012, 13:25:38 UTC
!!!

(more coherent thoughts to come at a later time.)

(also, where is my roadtrip fic? Huh huh huh?)

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hibernate July 22 2012, 14:17:04 UTC
Guuuuuh, please forgive this comment for being incoherent, but I am a melting pot of gooey emotion. Clearly you are trying to kill me with feelings, and you are succeeding quite well. So many parts of this I want to keep forever, but maybe especially Myka thinking she's forgiving HG too fast, like she can't help herself. You know, Helena betrayed Myka more than any of the others, and though it made her leave the Warehouse, when she came back she was the one who kept fighting for HG. And guuuh, happiest place and hopeful future and that moment with the grappler and HG In the Warehouse, my emotions. (Also, LOLing so hard at the "you're loud" bit.)

This is such a lovely fixit and totally exactly what I need right now before my inevitable season 4 breakdown.

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rhyfeddu July 22 2012, 15:49:04 UTC
Oh, this was great. and great timing for us, too. What a relief! lol To get this version of what can be before the premiere.

...there's so much between them and it's entirely unspoken - but not, Myka knows, entirely unfelt YES. Perfect.

Loved Leena's aura read and schooling of Artie. Loved the "You're loud" (of course :b). And Myka's declaration right before that. Could so hear Myka stumbling thru it so earnestly.

I'm so glad you resurrected this piece for us. :) And resurrected HG too.

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cardiogod July 22 2012, 17:49:56 UTC
This is lovely! It flows so seamlessly and it feels so honest and it made my heart hurt in such a delicious way.

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dasku July 22 2012, 19:25:04 UTC

This is gorgeous. And not ust HG and Myka's characterizations, but the little details <3
Fantastic job!

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