Eternity

[mistearyusdiva2]

It was a bright day as the sun glowed at its highest point of the day , the heat radiating across the land below. The bright green , lush grass reflected the rays as did the water in the stream that ran across the field. A little further people were gathering , dressed in their favorite formal clothes - friends , families and some curious onlookers

Comments

[i_17bingo]

"She's been taken by the Devil," Natalie's mother wailed before collapsing on the pathway.

I really love this closing. It's so much easier for some people to imagine something as insane as that than the truth.

[mistearyusdiva2]

Thank u for reading and for the feedback. Appreciate it :)

[mistearyusdiva2]

And yes sometimes its easier for people to imagine the absurd and pass the responsibility or blame on to others rather than looking at themselves.

[whipchick]

So neat to see you trying different styles each week!

[mistearyusdiva2]

Thank u whipchick. I appreciate that you are reading :)

[karmasoup]

Natalie's mother reminds me of a munchhausen type. It's no wonder she ran. And good for her.

[mistearyusdiva2]

Hehehe .... yeah glad that she did it sooner than later .... Thank u for reading and glad you could identify with the character's decision.