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[mistearyusdiva2]

Emraan had been careful to time his plan. But her presence caught him by surprise. He had been clocking her movements for the last one month and she never returned home before 9pm on Fridays. Looking around the room , he just couldn't understand why any woman would have so many pictures of herself scattered all over the walls of the entire house.

Comments

[eternal_ot]

*Applause*..your best work on Idol so far...loved the twist in the end..didn't see that coming at all...Good Job! Kudos!

[mistearyusdiva2]

Thank u so much ..... you just made my day.

[bleodswean]

What a twist!!! I couldn't help but like Emraan....but he's not worthy of that! Complicated bit of writing here!

[mistearyusdiva2]

Thank u so much for stopping by to read. I am curious if the complicated is in a good way or not so good way :) Like I said concrits are welcome ... always

[bleodswean]

Complicated in a good way! Your twist at the end and Emraan's job....you added quite a bit of detail!

[grail76]

Very nice. I liked this.

[rayaso]

Nice twist at the end with the twins! Too bad Emraan killed anyone -- he seemed such a conscientious burglar, and genuinely upset by it.

[jem0000000]

Oh, the poor sisters. I like the setup -- that he cased it so carefully, and the one thing he didn't know was the thing that got him.