Life with Jon

[mistearyusdiva2]

Comments

[rayaso]

I kept waiting and waiting for them to get back together, so you did a great job of keeping my interest keen. Very well written.

[sarcasmoqueen]

I enjoyed this story very much. It was very compelling.

However, I did find the myself distracted by some grammatical errors (dizzyness instead of dizziness, contractions without the apostrophe, for example), so it might be a good idea to have an outside source proof read for you... fortunately, I was so intrigued by the story that I was able to overlook it.

[suesniffsglue]

This gave me complicated feelings. Really interesting concept, and beautifully constructed! Nice job

[karmasoup]

What a sweet, romantic love affair!

[adoptedwriter]

I enjoyed this. Reminds me of my college honey, but he died in 2012. AW